Wow, thanks for all the great encouragement on this story!
Vicki, I'm so glad that this look into Lois's head is working for you. Lois and I are nothing alike, so she's pretty challenging for me! My beta-readers are keeping me on the straight and narrow with her!
Thanks for the feedback, Laurach! Starting after the kidnapping had already taken place was something of a challenge for myself, but it does kind of dive right in.
Deadly Chakram--you want Clark to tell Lois the Secret already? Umm...hmm. :rolleyes:
I loved your comment, Queen of the Capes! I was afraid people would think the story was too long--but I definitely couldn't do it in just one part!
Mozartmaid, I hope you're still glad I'm being 'ambitious' when you get deeper into the story!
Thanks, Lynn!
Had to smile at your comment, VirginiaR. I guess I got carried away with the five senses thing.
Another pun?
Very cute, Deadly Chakram.
Umm...how to answer your question, Framework4? I guess I just have to say 'no comment.'
I love the detailed feedback, BJ! And I'm glad you like the light/dark theme--it's somewhat prevalent! As to the suspense, I promise that I answer your questions!
Thanks, everyone, for being so kind with your comments! I love the motivation!