Oh, Wow, is Clark in trouble.

I loved this part! Thank you for finally putting Lois and Clark together in a room. I love how comfortable they are together. Good going, Lois!

You've got me hooked. Or as Tempus would say, 'Duh!'

You accomplished a lot here. It is good to see them already attracted to each other. More soon. laura

You tied up a lot of loose ends there.

We now know how Paul Lang got Superman's sperm.

Clark knows the kids are biologically his.

Lois knows she's not a killer.

Lois has got her Pulitzer-winning story.

Lex Luthor has learned that you don't mess with Lois Lane.

The Delconto organization is in shambles.

I eagerly await more!

Awesome chapter, SQD! I know that Lois has been severely wronged and she has serious issues, but I really love who Lois has become. You've added quite a bit (and changed some, too!) since I last saw this and it flows so well now.

I can't help but smile at how comfortable Lois is in her own skin. Maybe it comes from spending all that time being confined in jail - alone with her thoughts. I loved how she practically took over Clark's apartment and silently demanded that he and Lana accept her for herself.

The early morning discussion was my favorite part. Her curiosity about Clark's super side, her admission about shooting and wanting to kill Lex ...

I'm also glad that she's finally started to mourn. What better place to break down and cry than against Clark's chest?

More soon,
B

Loved this part - expect for the Lana parts.

It was great seeing Lois and Clark together and this Lois does have so much baggage.

Oh, and I am so happy that you posted today

It would be bittersweet to see Lois reunited with Perry and Collin.

Great to see the return of Mad Dog Lane. I was a little concerned when Lois claimed she was going to kill Lex - but she didn't end up doing it.

Joan

Delightful part. Liked the way you handled the Lana character. Nice clear proof of the break between them. Clear evidence that she knew about his origins and still accepted him. Well done.

Loved Lois in this part, not killing Luthor, her interactions with Lana and Clark. Delightful.

I re-read this part and had to come back.
LOVED this exchange. This Lois is so open with Clark. It's amazing, really. She's not holding anything back.

Maybe that's what happens to someone when they feel they've lost everything; the fears that plague us in normal, every day life disappear when there's nothing else to lose. Oh, and she probably had a lot of time on her hands to think things through, but never really got a chance to talk about them. It's probably a relief just to express her inmost thoughts.

Clark's reaction was perfect. Scandalized by her comment and then even more scandalized that he wasn't more concerned about Lois' murderous tendencies. If he hadn't been working on catching Luthor for almost three years, he might have reacted differently.

Their conversation in the kitchen was so vivid; I could really see them saying those things to each other.

Yep, CK is definitely in trouble, but in a good way.

Bring it on.

No, really. Can I have the next part now?

B

More please. Now. Ok, great