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Okay, this is a bit confusing, but I think I get it (kinda sorta). My favorite line, though, is not the final one this time, but the one where Lois makes herself clear.

I like it! Please write the whole story, I want more already!!!

What in the world are you talking about here? I thought the story was absolutely hysterical.

FWIW, I figured out who her husband was as soon as the INS was mentioned, and the green card only confirmed it. To me the real punch line was “Clark...I...I'm pregnant.”

Joy,
Lynn

CUTE!!!!

Since there wasn't a lot of meat to sink my teeth into I think that telling you that I enjoyed this one so much is almost an understatement. Sometimes the subtle subject matter is overlooked. Again, cute story.

Thanks.
Pat

Curious! Post more.

Did Superman marry Lois to get a green card? And then they concosmated the marriage?

Or was she pregnant with someone else's child? (and only discovered this AFTER she married Superman?) I know it's implied that it is Superman's and the tenderness between her and Clark imply more than just a partnership...

But I have a strange question... Does she know CK=S? Because Lois called him 'partner' in her mind when he walked into the newsroom. And maybe he (Clark, he) is just in the 'loop' about her green-card marriage and she doesn't know about his other identity.

And the last series of questions: HOW long have they been married? How quickly did Lois realize she was pregnant? Because it sounds like the news just fit the fan about the marriage. Were they JUST married? If so, it was an 'overnight' discovery that could also be a fun line to explore. Or have they been hiding the marriage for a while?

There's a lot to work on here! A lot of meat of them thar bones. I would love to see and read a fleshed out story. Great teaser!

I tend to agree with Lara - my favorite line is when Lois makes herself clear - but my favorite part is that it's *Clark* that steps over Lois' newly drawn line-in-the-sand.

Oh, and I loved reading all the questions in the fdk. It's precisely for all the unanswered questions that you should leave the story just as it is.

Wonderful. I'm so glad you've posted something new.

B

Yep.

Thanks for the kind words, everyone.

Actually, I don't think there will be any more -- at least not from me, any time soon. I just don't know how they'd get out of this one, or even *if* they'd get out of it. If anyone else wants to take a crack at the premise, though, be my guest. ^^

Intriguing premise. I'm with VirginiaR - wondering if Lois realizes CK = Superman. You could have fun with this.

Joan

I guess I thought of this kind of as a sequel of sorts to Wendy's "Green Card" . I figured that this was what happened next!

That was actually my inspiration. Maybe I'll take a crack at this, maybe I won't. I don't usually like writing stories with no idea how they'll end, but.... Who knows?

This was just awesome!

I really liked the way you set up the situation in so few words and then made it infinitely tougher with news of the pregnancy.

LOL about the speculation that Lois could be having an affair with Clark!

Corrina.

/taps foot/ Where's the rest, missy? /continues foot tapping while adding FDK/

Sounds innocently enough like a Season 4 story. But what have you cooked up there?

Why is Cat back? Is it post season 4?
And what's Clark done now?

So, what did Clark do? It's got to be something rather minor if he's able to jke about it. Or did she marry Claude, Dan, Lex? All of them?

Or it's Clark, after all?

Divorce? And he's so calm? What going on between them?

Okay, so they're in honey with each other but consider their marriage to be a problem?

Greencard? Did you go off and took lessons from Wendy?

Oooh...

Oooh...

So, where's the rest? And why would Clark consummate the marriage with Lois if they're considering a divorce?...

a long time later...

/slaps head/

Originally, Lois wanted to divorce Superman so she and Clark could get married officially and have a regular family. Only now she's carrying Superman's child instead of Clark's and when she's divorcing Superman... Well, first of all the child's going to be gangster bait. Second of all, Superman, Lois, and Clark are all going to look bad because of the divorce since a floating child is involved. Yep, that's a mess. Did I already mention that you need to finish this?

Michael

PS: Please? /adds cherry/

Very interesting! I'd love to read more on that!

Hahahaa

I dig it! Great job! Would LOVE to see this expanded upon.