FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/15/11 09:56 PM
Feedback here please.
Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/16/11 01:53 AM
I see you answered my question about when the next part would show up. 
So, Lois has a huge chunk of K and the bullet (it wasn't flushed). So are they going to the Bermuda Triangle on vacation?
Obviously Lois is thinking WHY hadn't she figured out Clark's secret when Bill Henderson had. And, no, Lois, you aren't! Love is blind. Duh!
Clark is healing!
No more surgical scars! Yea! 
Poor Clark. He doesn't know how to be himself without his powers.
We still don't have that smiley fanning itself, do we? I need it for that small moment. Wow!
"Oh, Goody! More tiramisu," thinks Moose.
Isn't that what you interrupted in the other room, Martha? Lois taking advantage. 
And if Clark doesn't have the power of flight yet and Lois is still guardian of Moose, I'm thinking first few days will be spent in Metropolis.
What?! Only one more part left? Oh, my. We better see some more heat like we saw when Lois touched Clark. Please! Pretty, please!
If you can't tell, very much enjoying this fic.
So, Lois has a huge chunk of K and the bullet (it wasn't flushed). So are they going to the Bermuda Triangle on vacation?
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“Am I really galac– “ A car horn honked loudly behind them, ruining the moment. Lois bit off a curse.
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He was accustomed to his powers. When they were absent, he felt crippled – he was crippled. He hated that.
Poor Clark. He doesn't know how to be himself without his powers.Quote
She came near him and ran a finger down his chest. Clark froze. Fire roared up inside him at her touch.
“You’re healed,” Lois said softly. “You took out the staples.”
Clark’s voice choked in his mouth as he tried to reply. Lois, touching him so intimately… he couldn’t speak.
Lois licked her lips, and Clark was almost undone. Lois’s eyes widened and she put her entire hand on his chest, not just one finger. The electricity between them fairly crackled.
“You’re healed,” Lois said softly. “You took out the staples.”
Clark’s voice choked in his mouth as he tried to reply. Lois, touching him so intimately… he couldn’t speak.
Lois licked her lips, and Clark was almost undone. Lois’s eyes widened and she put her entire hand on his chest, not just one finger. The electricity between them fairly crackled.
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Aroused wasn’t the kind of answer he could give his mother.
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Clark smiled as he recognized the small box of tiramisu. Maybe he’d finally get to feed Lois her dessert – third time lucky?
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“Yes, you,” Clark replied. “Perry made you my keeper while I healed from the surgery. Well, I’m healed, but I can’t let anyone know. Anyone but you, of course.” Ideas began to bubble. “Isn’t it time that you had a vacation, too? You’ve been working just as hard as I have over the last two years.”
“Well…”
“I’m thinking of chocolates in Switzerland, seeing the whales near Antarctica, lounging on a tropical beach,” Clark cajoled.
“It’s true,” Martha said, amused. “Lois, you know Superman. You should take advantage.”
“Well…”
“I’m thinking of chocolates in Switzerland, seeing the whales near Antarctica, lounging on a tropical beach,” Clark cajoled.
“It’s true,” Martha said, amused. “Lois, you know Superman. You should take advantage.”
And if Clark doesn't have the power of flight yet and Lois is still guardian of Moose, I'm thinking first few days will be spent in Metropolis.
What?! Only one more part left? Oh, my. We better see some more heat like we saw when Lois touched Clark. Please! Pretty, please!
If you can't tell, very much enjoying this fic.
Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/16/11 03:37 AM
I LOVE this story! *sigh* I don't want it to end!
The little scene with Lois touching Clark's chest sizzled right off the page, er screen. Loved it!
Sounds good to me! Where do I sign up, Superman? 
The little scene with Lois touching Clark's chest sizzled right off the page, er screen.
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“I’m thinking of chocolates in Switzerland, seeing the whales near Antarctica, lounging on a tropical beach,” Clark cajoled.
Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/16/11 01:23 PM
Glad to see Clark is recovering and that Lois seems to be forgiving him.
Love the idea of Lois and Clark having a three week vacation.
I'm worried about all those fresh fruits and vegatables going bad too.
Joan
Love the idea of Lois and Clark having a three week vacation.
I'm worried about all those fresh fruits and vegatables going bad too.
Joan
Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/16/11 07:27 PM
Cute chapter.
Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/18/11 07:33 AM
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“He said, ‘You can’t fix stupid.’”
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"I love her but it's best to let her think I'm dead"
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“Am I really galac– “
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Lois came out of the bathroom and looked at the pile with poorly concealed panic. Clark recognized the fear that she might actually be called upon to cook some of this someday.
On the other hand, now Clark will have to come over and do something with all those supplies before they spoil.Quote
“Since I know Superman, maybe I can ask his mother questions about his childhood.”
Clark groaned.
His father looked on in amusement as Martha started. “Oh, he was such a sweet little baby when he came to us in that spaceship…”
Clark groaned.
His father looked on in amusement as Martha started. “Oh, he was such a sweet little baby when he came to us in that spaceship…”
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Maybe he’d finally get to feed Lois her dessert – third time lucky?
I guess, now that he's all healed up and Lois is left with lot's of wanting as far as Clark sans shirt is concerned, part 9 will give it all a nice bow on top?
Michael
Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/18/11 08:57 PM
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That was his mother, Clark thought. In a crisis, her instinct was to feed everyone.
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When they were absent, he felt crippled – he was crippled. He hated that.
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Aroused wasn’t the kind of answer he could give his mother.
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Clark smiled as he recognized the small box of tiramisu. Maybe he’d finally get to feed Lois her dessert – third time lucky?
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“Since I know Superman, maybe I can ask his mother questions about his childhood.”
Great ending. Glad to see everything work out all right - even Lois accepting Clark for who he is.
Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 - 06/19/11 01:27 AM
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Martha ran her hand down Clark’s chest as well, clucking in satisfaction as she noted the absence of the surgical staples. “How are you feeling, honey?”
Aroused wasn’t the kind of answer he could give his mother. Clark settled for, “Fine.”
Aroused wasn’t the kind of answer he could give his mother. Clark settled for, “Fine.”
