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Posted By: Deadly Chakram FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/05/11 11:55 PM
I just really, really wanted to write something dark.

Also: Note that this is not some "Alt" Clark - just an alt story in which he actually did go to NK. This is "our" Clark, Lois and time.
Posted By: jackiek Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/06/11 12:11 PM
Interesting beginning. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/06/11 12:51 PM
Thanks jackiek! I'll try to post one chapter every day or so. smile
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/06/11 07:35 PM
I started reading. I am curious to see where it goes. I am glad you are enjoying writing it.Laura
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/06/11 08:44 PM
Thanks Laura! Part 2 is already up!
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/06/11 09:41 PM
Ooohh... Damaged Clark. PTSD Clark. Lots of possibilities for drama and angst here.

I'm looking forward to this, dark topic and all. I know you'll do a good job with it.
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/06/11 09:56 PM
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Originally posted by IolantheAlias:
Ooohh... Damaged Clark. PTSD Clark. Lots of possibilities for drama and angst here.

I'm looking forward to this, dark topic and all. I know you'll do a good job with it.
Exactly! PTSD Clark.

Thanks, I hope I don't disappoint you!
Posted By: AntiKryptonite Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/07/11 12:44 AM
Very sad. I hope Clark's natural strength can help him get through this.

I love how supportive Lois is.

And I love how Perry and Jimmy helped out! The sentence about Jimmy coming over after work to keep her company was very touching. Obviously, Perry's giving her a lot of leeway as well. They're great friends to Lois and Clark, which is something it sounds like they both need right now.

Very intriguing!
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Battle Scars (1/9) - 06/07/11 01:04 AM
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Originally posted by AntiKryptonite:
Very sad. I hope Clark's natural strength can help him get through this.

I love how supportive Lois is.

And I love how Perry and Jimmy helped out! The sentence about Jimmy coming over after work to keep her company was very touching. Obviously, Perry's giving her a lot of leeway as well. They're great friends to Lois and Clark, which is something it sounds like they both need right now.

Very intriguing!
Thanks AK! Perry and Jimmy are great characters, so I always try to put a good light on them, even if I don't write dialogue for them.
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