FDK: Please, don't let me leave, Lois - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Very nice.

I like the way you've captured Clark's struggles through this period.

I like this section:

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I’ve seen how he looks at you. I have no doubt what he has in his mind, and I’m afraid it could be what you want.

I have seen how you look at him; you like him, as a friend … perhaps as more … I don’t know. And I don’t know if I really want to know.

Do you want me? Should I keep trying to be a part of your life? Or do you want him, and it would be easier if I left for good so at least one of us could be happy?

I can get a sense of what Clark's own insecurities -- and his unwillingness to open up and trust Lois -- are doing to him.

Bob

Oh I truly enjoyed this!! The way you go into his head is perfect. Thank you for sharing this with us!

You've done a great job of capturing Clark's feelings at that time.

Joan

Very heartfelt! Really enjoyed reading Clark's thoughts and agonized feelings at that point in the story. You're right on!!

Yes, great job in expressing Clark's feelings and thoughts during that episode.

Thanks for sharing