I had to explain that Wanda Detroit accent somehow-- so I figured Gone With the Wind was as good a culprit as any!

Comments welcome!

The explanation for the accent was great. Including that Lucy still remembered it and Lois just had the latent memory.

And speaking of Lucy. Poor thing is a victim of her hormones. I did wonder if it would come to a confrontation later on.

Awww

Michael

I hope Lucy won't get into trouble now that she knows Lois isn't dead.

It's interesting to see an alternative evolution of Superman. Will Lois discover Clark first? Or will he enlist an alias on his own? Or maybe Lois will even help him develop that persona? So many things to play with.


Joan

I, too, liked the explanation for the accent!

Very "real" of Lois to feel that she has to tell Lucy the truth about her being alive.

Also hope that Lucy won't get into more trouble, especially now that she knows Lois is alive.

Looking forward to how the creation of Superman will play out and it sounds like Lois is almost halfway there to figuring out that CK=S. Also, when she does decide to jump off the roof of the Daily Planet and Clark catches her .... She will be really surprised to see *his" face

Looking forward to more!

Darth Michael
LOL thanks. Yeah, I always wondered how a gal who grew up in Metropolis would have picked up a deep south accent -- even with amnesia

Will post the next bit either tonight or early this weekend -- depends on how much writing I get done this afternoon. Hope to finish another part today and get it sent to my fab BRs!

scifiJoan
On the creation of Superman -- I hope you guys like how I'll do it. I won't say much except, we're getting closer!

DW
Thanks. Lucy just kept nosing in on my story, so there you have it-- she got her sister to talk.

Not going to say more on the creation of Superman... you guys will have to wait and see what I do!

Thanks for the feedback!!

Anyway, hope there are some lurking readers out there... and I didn't scare too many people away with the early part of the story.