I'll be back to reply to part 8 comments later today... hope y'all enjoyed this

PJ

Yay! They got it!

And double yay! What a sweet bedtime conversation.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I like how you got this in, very clever:
~Liz

Finally, we know about the title!!

Nice dialogue in the room, and the part at the postal office...

Yes! They got it. Poor Trask, he'll never know what he missed; on the other hand, he's still alive ...

Nan

Whew! Glad to see it was just the maintenance men, instead of someone like Trask! And now Trask can't get his hands on the kryptonite. Unless.... I hope the car is intact in the morning. The bedtime conversation was sweet, too. And they're even snuggling.

One more part to go.

Hi,

Great part.
I want to know what Martha and Jonathan are going to said about their adventure.

More ASAP, please.

MAF

Aw that was great. Looking forward to the conclusion. Laura

That's a nice section Pam. All you have to do now is to get Lois to say those three scary words and the story will come to an end.

The bedtime conversation was really nice to read.

And I don't get why those guys can just drop off and fall asleep...

gerry

Pam,
Sorry I'm behind again
This is great
ditto others
more
merry

I don't know, Pam, that instalment was awfully sweet and waffy. You missed out on a good opportunity for a wham there.

With only one part left it's going to be hard to get a good wham in there and still have a happy ending, unless....

That's it, isn't it. You are going to cross up the gentle readers with a big wham at the end, so they don't live happily ever after. Clever.

Tank (who is constantly amazed at how he is able to see through all the smoke and mirrors that the writers put up to cut to the heart of the story)

I'm gonna be sorry when this ends...it's been such a pleasure. I certainly hope you've got the next part (K should be easy! We know what that stands for!) mapped out.

Best,
Sherry