FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/03/11 05:43 PM
That was cute! And how like a kid to almost get it right. Nice vision of Lois and Clark's future.
Joan
Joan
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/03/11 07:18 PM
Ha! He almost got it. Cute story. 
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/03/11 07:38 PM
LOl Typical kid! Cute.
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/03/11 08:36 PM
Cute! *g*
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/03/11 09:36 PM
Sweet fun story!! 
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/04/11 02:43 AM
That was very cute (and so typical of Lois Lane's son)
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/04/11 08:33 AM
Very cute!
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/04/11 09:11 AM
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“Call back in a few days.”
I did sort of wonder about something like this, but all I could come up with, was 'and then Clark flew up to the roof and pulled down the El-flag from its pole, stored it in its box and flew off on his state visit.' Yours is much better
Michael
Re: FDK - Man of the House (1/1) - 01/04/11 05:17 PM
Thank you guys so much for the wonderful feedback. I'm so flattered, I might just write another one. 
I'm glad that you all enjoyed my little vignette. It just kind of popped in my head and wouldn't leave. 
DW - I agree with you that this behavior would be typical of Lois' child. Leave it to him to improv at the wrong time. But when you think about it, he's like Clark as well. He's just trying to be helpful to the caller.
Michael - Hmmmm. . . interesting ending you thought up there.
And I'm grateful for the compliment. Of course, the orginal idea was the punch line. It was so clear in my mind what CJ would say in that situation. I then had to build the story around that. The rest is, as they say, history. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
Thanks again to everyone who responded.
I'm glad that you all enjoyed my little vignette. It just kind of popped in my head and wouldn't leave. DW - I agree with you that this behavior would be typical of Lois' child. Leave it to him to improv at the wrong time. But when you think about it, he's like Clark as well. He's just trying to be helpful to the caller.
Michael - Hmmmm. . . interesting ending you thought up there.
And I'm grateful for the compliment. Of course, the orginal idea was the punch line. It was so clear in my mind what CJ would say in that situation. I then had to build the story around that. The rest is, as they say, history. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks again to everyone who responded.