FDK Prisoners 5/10 - 10/21/10 02:37 PM
Looking forward to your comments!
Re: FDK Prisoners 5/10 - 10/21/10 06:08 PM
Go, Lois! I was so afraid that Lex would get her with the needle again! Whew! But now Clark can't get close to her because she has the K, so I guess she needs to get rid of it before she finds him or he finds her. I hoped that Clark could hear her whispers calling to him, but I guess we'll see soon; maybe he was just waiting for the K to not be a problem, so didn't interrupt their struggle, although we do have 5 more parts so a lot could happen still. 
Re: FDK Prisoners 5/10 - 10/22/10 06:53 AM
WHOA! I guess this is the stuff that you added 
Cool twist that you had Lex come back and they have somewhat of a brawl as I was wondering how you originally had her wake up to no one there and she just up and left. This was better and tied up some lose ends
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Cool twist that you had Lex come back and they have somewhat of a brawl as I was wondering how you originally had her wake up to no one there and she just up and left. This was better and tied up some lose ends
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Re: FDK Prisoners 5/10 - 10/22/10 05:55 PM
I wonder how long the police will be able to hold Clark when Lois walks into the station wanting to ask Henderson if he knows whether or not Superman has died or not.
Tank (who always likes it when Lois smacks Lex around)
Tank (who always likes it when Lois smacks Lex around)
Re: FDK Prisoners 5/10 - 10/22/10 08:50 PM
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While he winced in pain, she grabbed the syringe and plunged it through his jacket into his arm, cringing as she did so.
“Hope you like a taste of your own medicine, Lex,” she said disdainfully. Immediately she grabbed the Kryptonite again, as much for a light as to get rid of it. Lois looked around quickly for an exit, her heart pounding. She didn’t know if she got the anesthetic in him, or if she’d merely stunned him, but she wasn’t going to wait around to find out.
“Hope you like a taste of your own medicine, Lex,” she said disdainfully. Immediately she grabbed the Kryptonite again, as much for a light as to get rid of it. Lois looked around quickly for an exit, her heart pounding. She didn’t know if she got the anesthetic in him, or if she’d merely stunned him, but she wasn’t going to wait around to find out.
Can you hear what the little guy is singing?
"Go, Lois ... Go, Lois ... Go, Lois ..."
Hee.
It looks like Clark isn't going to need a chance to sneak out of jail as Superman ... if Lois can get out of there, she might just come to him!
Kathy
Re: FDK Prisoners 5/10 - 10/22/10 11:10 PM
Oh good, no more hypodermic needles for Lois. Mad Dog Lane holds up to her title 
Hmm, I sense a twist in the story if she's got the kryptonite on hand with her... 
Hmm, I sense a twist in the story if she's got the kryptonite on hand with her...
Re: FDK Prisoners 5/10 - 10/23/10 12:54 AM
Does this mean Superman will find her on one of his midnight runs?