FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (10/38) - 09/24/10 09:22 PM
Sorry not much happens in this chapter. The next chapter has a bit of an adventure, though. 
Deja Vu
Deja Vu
Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (10/38) - 09/25/10 03:47 PM
On the contrary, I think the story gets more intriguing in this part. Many secrets waiting to be revealed. Right now, I'm very curious whether or not Clarkent has superpowers.
Great story, can't wait for more!
Amber
Great story, can't wait for more!
Amber
Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (10/38) - 09/25/10 07:24 PM
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“Still--never lose hope, Clarkent. What the people need right now is a beacon which will shine hope upon them and spread it throughout the kingdom. Maybe then, change will finally happen.”
Kathy
Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (10/38) - 09/26/10 03:28 AM
I agree with Kathy, there're a lot of hints towards 'Sir Charles'. But at the same time, if I'm right about Clarkent's parents, he wouldn't be Sir Charles in the way of Soul Mates. And it was Baron Tempos, not Duke Tempos. Also, Tempos would only get to wear the title in the first place if Alexander died. Plus, I get the feeling that Loisette could be queen in her own right from the musings of Samuel, which would mean she would not need to agree to anything Tempos would demand.
Oh, and since Alexander is the older brother and 18, that means Tempos is something like 17 and already went through 3 wives? When did he start, and why is he marrying his newest conquest just a couple of weeks after meeting her. If they're nobility, too, then the parents would probably start to be ticked off by now, and if they're just your average wench, there shouldn't be any need for marriage.
But enough of such speculation. /goes to FDK for part 10/
I'm getting the feeling that Peri had something to with delivering Clarkent to the farmer-couple. Also, in their day and age, Clarkent's musings are just a small step away from stealing from the rich and giving to the poor.
11, please?
Michael
Oh, and since Alexander is the older brother and 18, that means Tempos is something like 17 and already went through 3 wives? When did he start, and why is he marrying his newest conquest just a couple of weeks after meeting her. If they're nobility, too, then the parents would probably start to be ticked off by now, and if they're just your average wench, there shouldn't be any need for marriage.
But enough of such speculation. /goes to FDK for part 10/
I'm getting the feeling that Peri had something to with delivering Clarkent to the farmer-couple. Also, in their day and age, Clarkent's musings are just a small step away from stealing from the rich and giving to the poor.
11, please?
Michael
Re: FDK - Gawain and the Black Knight (10/38) - 09/26/10 06:35 PM
Amber-- I'm glad you thought it got more intriguing with this part!
Kathy--
I guess you'll just have to wait and see!
Michael-- I wanted Tempos to be just a little bit of a Bluebeard in this story, and he would have started collecting wives the moment he was able. As for angry parents, well, if it looks like an accident, can they be angry?
And you're right that Clarkent's musings do seem a small step away from stealing from the rich and giving to the poor...But our hero is too noble for that, right?
Kathy--
I guess you'll just have to wait and see!Michael-- I wanted Tempos to be just a little bit of a Bluebeard in this story, and he would have started collecting wives the moment he was able. As for angry parents, well, if it looks like an accident, can they be angry?
And you're right that Clarkent's musings do seem a small step away from stealing from the rich and giving to the poor...But our hero is too noble for that, right?