Goodness, Neville growing up with Lois and Clark? Seriously? That should screw his whole character (as described where it is). Then again, he does turn out a hero - at least in my opinion.
Neville doesn't get used much as a viewpoint character - I think he could be fun to write, especially with such a different background. Once I've finished the current game design thing I may have a go at it.
Posted by Angie in the story thread, so moving it here. Sorry, don't have time today to go through the complicated process to enable me to post it under Angie's account:
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So we're FDKing on this thread? Ok. [Smile] I really like this story premise. I hope you write it!