Any feedback goes here. And bonus points goes to anyone who spots the intentional ‘error’ I had to add to the fic for it to post! (Extra thanks goes to Carol who helped me to work out why it wasn’t posting )

Another excellent story part.

LOL. Perfect!

re: Her changing the rules and making Clark squirm...If the tone of the first two parts had been different, or if I thought that the story would continue beyond the next part, I would be really nervous now -- I could easily see her strategy backfiring and Clark never believing her when she said that she was just winding him up. (To use the delightful British phrase.)

I'm sorry, but I just can't be >Objective about errors, even if they are there for a good reason.

Any idea when the final part will be posted?

Joy,
Lynn

I love it! Great idea, to make Clark squirm. I'm glad Lois finally figured it out. She had to go back to first principles and not exclude anyone, even the people she thought she knew best.

I think the self-examination that Lois will be forced to do will be very valuable to her.

Adorable, more soon. Laura

Sounds like he knows

Oh oh, I know how this could play out

Fun! Looking forward to finding out what's going to happen in part 3.

Michael

IolantheAlias, well, Lois had to figure it out really. It's hard enough to keep her in the dark when Superman hasn't been dropping anvil sized hints!
Laura, glad you're enjoying it. More will be posted when more is ready for posting.
Michael, yeah, Bobby knew. I don't know why he knows, he just did. Characters do things like that sometimes, I didn't question it.

Right, I'd better go and finish polishing up part three.
- Alisha

And Lois realises that CK=S.

Looking forward to how she is going to make him squirm in part 3