LOL Delightful! Even the hair cuts were fun! Very cute concept. I love Lois's rant at the end. Nice job. Laura

Enjoyed reading this story........it was quite humorous

Well, that's a quintessential Tank story if ever I saw one! Lois gets one haircut after another, she is killed several times, and Clark is killed a few times too, but the worst thing that can happen to her is that she gets to have kids and grandkids and is forced to babysit them!

I guess the only thing you didn't manage to squeeze into this ficlet was something nasty to do to Jimmy, eh?

Ann

That was great and typically Lois to have thought that the "happy" ending was not really a happy ever after.

I loved it!

You know, after you stated 52 universes, I immediately wonder if this would be an homage to your Tank endings

Ann summed things up nicely

So, are you going to write the Ultraman/Superwoman fic next?

Michael

Just a quick note with some explanations.

The fifty two universes is a comic book thing. Apparently after this latest crises they've gone through they have now settled down to 52 universes. I don't know why they picked 52, but it worked for their big deal weekly comic (called 52) which came out last year.

The Crime Syndicate is a comic book entity. They rule over Earth-3 or something like that. There is a fairly good annimated DVD that came out recently called "Justice League; Crisie on Two Earths", where the Justice League and the Crime Syndicate have to battle. SuperWoman has always been meant to be Wonder Woman's analog, but she is actually the Lois Lane of that world and is married to Ultraman, who is dumber than a brick, but fools around with Owlman.

Tank (who wasn't sure if some of the more gentle gentle readers wouldn't be a bit upset over all the deaths of the alternate Lois and Clarks)

I enjoyed chuckling at your fic and did wonder where you were going with it. Well, I guess we all have to go sometime!

Loved it.