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Posted By: Seme FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/16/10 09:35 PM
Great job!
I loved the way how Lois and Clark are both smitten with each other. I wish if love could be so beautiful in real life.

You are a great writer....your writing makes me feel like I'm actually there witnessing the moments between L&C.

More plzzzzzz............
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/17/10 12:15 AM
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He paced the floor. He flew to twelve rescues. He called his mother- got the answering service. He flipped through a few magazines and looked at his watch for the millionth time. He'd showered, shaved, and saved six people, showered again, and he still had three hours to go.
Your description of Clark's nervousness before his date with Lois is just adorable!

And I completely loved Lois's reactions and behaviour at Callard's:

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"Why do you suppose anyone would want to punish someone else so much?"

Her strange question caused Clark's brows to furrow in slight worry.

"I mean," she continued as she lifted her dinner fork. "One fork would be okay. Us normal forks just lick the dang thing clean between courses. Fewer dishes to wash." She put it down and looked up at Clark. "And speaking of courses, it's all dinner to me. Give me the dang salad or not. Sometimes I'm in the mood. And I like bread with most of my meals. Dessert is always good. But still all dinner."
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And her reaction to the wine was even funnier:

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"Yeah, what can I say? I babble. And oh my God!" She snatched the bottle of wine away from the waiter, surprising him to no end. "This is like... $500 bucks a bottle!"
She snatched the bottle from the waiter! Bet he isn't used to that!

And this was wonderful:

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"I took an expensive bottle of wine home once."

Lois felt herself relax slightly. She could just imagine what Martha had said.

"Mom drank a glass, then put the cork back in. She told me that she knew what money tasted like, but she still preferred the priceless stuff." Clark grinned- that grin he had when he was remembering something he was especially fond of. "The priceless stuff is what you can get with the change in your pocket on your way out to your favorite picnic spot with someone you love. It took me all night, but I finally figured out that she'd drank cheap wine many times while I was growing up. And to this day I love picnics."
What a way for Clark to express his love for his Mom, but also, indeed, his love for Lois.

As for his new phone, howver, I have a question:

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He was just about to pour on the speed when his new phone began to ring. He smiled when he took it out and realized it was Lois calling already.

"I just wanted to see if you'd answer," she told him immediately.

"I'll always answer," he assured her.
Where will he carry his phone in his Superman suit? Ah, don't answer. He'll carry it where he keeps his Clark Kent shirt, tie, dress jacket, dress pants and shoes tucked into his spandex suit, right? laugh

Great part! So good to see you back here, Squid!

Ann
Posted By: DW Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/17/10 02:23 AM
I am so happy that you posted the next part! smile

Loved this part and still looking forward to more hyper

P.S. You are a great writer and I love to read your stories!
Posted By: Lote Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/17/10 07:09 AM
I'm so glad you posted both 9 and 10. The ride's been great and am looking forward to the Christmas portion. smile
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/17/10 10:47 PM
Ah, I'm a waff puddle. smile I've really enjoyed the last few parts and am looking forward to the last couple!

JD
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/18/10 07:54 AM
This is a truly awesome story, as usual, stopquitdont. More please!
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Artemis
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/20/10 12:45 PM
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Wow, Clark thought as he absorbed every bit of energy flowing from her. "Tomorrow," he managed around the thick lump of regret and longing lodged in his throat.

"Promise?" she asked as she opened her eyes to look at him.

"Promise."
Someones going to be moving to the Northpole for the night laugh

So, is he going to propose on Christmas Eve?

Michael
Posted By: robinson Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/20/10 01:11 PM
I love this story! Of course I love all your stories. I am looking forward to the next parts.

Kathy
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Posted By: sarah Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/28/10 09:46 AM
Just wondering when the next part is coming. Hopefully soon--can't wait.

Sarah
Posted By: Seme Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/28/10 10:20 AM
I'm dying for the next part. When is it?
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 04/28/10 10:45 AM
Yes, I'm looking forward to it, too! hyper

Ann
Posted By: Seme Re: FDK My Inspiration 10 - 05/04/10 08:25 AM
Hi,
Where is my Inspiration? HUH?......
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