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Posted By: Deja Vu FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (17/34) - 04/13/10 08:56 PM
I'd say this is a pretty fitting chapter for the halfway point in this story.

dance
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (17/34) - 04/13/10 09:21 PM
Just a short comment here...

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“And the tall boots?” I asked weakly.
You're right, Clark, these shoes would have been much better!

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Or how about these?

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(For some reason I was unable to post the first image properly.)

Ah, but it's great to see Clark touching people and actually becoming Superman! Tell me, is Shelby, eh, Jericho, really going to be Krypto?

Ann
wink Hmmm, hey aren't those Dorothy's red shoes -- but Clark doesn't need help getting back to Kansas. rotflol rotflol rotflol
Posted By: DW Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (17/34) - 04/14/10 05:24 AM
Yeah clap he's becoming Superman!
So, was Krypto, the Superdog part of the original story or a rapid rewrite-scramble in response to the recent FDK threads?

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“It’s all right,” I rushed to assure her. “I’m—well, I’m getting over it.” I shrugged uncomfortably.

Lois tilted her head and studied me for a few seconds, as if to determine whether or not I was serious. Evidently, she was satisfied, as she told me with a smile, “I knew you would come around some time.”
Uh-huh. Clark getting touched by Lois sure has potential laugh

Michael
I've been following the FDK threads with interest and they've given me more than a few laugh


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So, was Krypto, the Superdog part of the original story or a rapid rewrite-scramble in response to the recent FDK threads?
Deja will no doubt answer for herself, but I can confirm that Krypto was very much a part of the original story. Not being a dog person, I was indifferent at first but the more I read, the better I liked the inclusion of Krypto in this wonderful story.
It's good to see Clark getting the Suit, but I'm still wondering what happened with Constance back in Africa! You evil cliffhanger person, you! wink
Ann--
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You're right, Clark, these shoes would have been much better!
Hahaha. I think you're absolutely right!

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Ah, but it's great to see Clark touching people and actually becoming Superman!
Hehe. It's great that he's moving forward, isn't it?

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Tell me, is Shelby, eh, Jericho, really going to be Krypto?
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EvelynC--
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Hmmm, hey aren't those Dorothy's red shoes -- but Clark doesn't need help getting back to Kansas.
LOL. Hahahahaha.


DW--
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Yeah clap he's becoming Superman!
Hurrah!


Michael--
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So, was Krypto, the Superdog part of the original story or a rapid rewrite-scramble in response to the recent FDK threads?
Heh heh. As Corrina said, the dog's been included all along. This has manifested itself in the foreshadowing with the bulldog outside Platt's building and my attempt to use animal imagery wherever I could! laugh

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Uh-huh. Clark getting touched by Lois sure has potential laugh
Haha. ...Changes everything, doesn't it?

Corrina--
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I've been following the FDK threads with interest and they've given me more than a few laugh
Hahaha. Me too!!

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Not being a dog person, I was indifferent at first but the more I read, the better I liked the inclusion of Krypto in this wonderful story.
Which I'm definitely glad about! It's been hard to be inclusive but not annoying with the dog. Writing animals is surprisingly hard work...


IolantheAlias--
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It's good to see Clark getting the Suit, but I'm still wondering what happened with Constance back in Africa! You evil cliffhanger person, you! wink
Hehehe. I think that might be the first time someone has called me evil! But I can't give all the answers right now, can I? laugh
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Hehehe. I think that might be the first time someone has called me evil!
Think of me calling you evil as an expression of affection. wink

I want more story, darn it!
Heh heh. I actually meant I think that was the first time I had been called evil with this story! laugh

Being called evil for cliffhangers gives me a strange sense of satisfaction.... Uh, I mean...

wink Hehe.
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Being called evil for cliffhangers gives me a strange sense of satisfaction....
Then you'll fit right in here! wink
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