I like it! Clark doesn't strike me as out of control; after all, he was told to run for his life, and that is just what he did. And if he was frightened; well, he apparently isn't invulnerable yet (or if he is, he doesn't realize it). And he had just had one gun pointed at him, by someone he knew. So of course he would be scared when a stranger comes toward him with his hand on a gun.

Looking forward to reading part 3. :-)

cheers,
Lynn

Read it this morning but didn't have time to leave fdk.

I really like what you've done with it so far.

More, please.

This is a really great take on the Snow White tale (unless I'm wrong on that.)

Excellent so far! I can't wait to see what J&M will do with teenage Clark.

Poor Kal! He has to be scared to death. I love that he has made his way to the Kents. I guess he's going to be getting a new name pretty soon, hmm?

I love the mental image of a trail through the corn-- I guess the extraterrestrial Kal is just too young to do a proper crop circle, eh?

Looking forward to more!