Hey guys! Thanks so much for all your comments on this section! I’m sorry that I haven’t been back sooner, but I was away for a few days during the week. The good news is that the buffer grew a little before I went; the bad news is that since then I’ve been writing other things. <g> (eg Captive Audience).
Anyway...
Enjoyed the 'Lois creates Superman' bits and I'm looking forward to their first official flight.
Thank you, Missy!
Couldn’t have a beginning story without Lois at least doing something to create her hero, now could I? <g>
And on that, Karen said:
I was a little jolted when Lois said they needed to go after Lex before getting the costume, but I liked Lois's thoughts. Can't wait to see the next part, including Costume Making 101.
and Maria added:
They should start the suit first. The should go to Smallville.
S (RetroRose) echoes this demand:
Also, nice touch "flying off" at the end. I also think they should head for Smallville and create Superman b4 taking on Lex (however, you are the writer, and I love what your doing to this story), but maybe you have something else in mind and I trust your instincts.
Thank you! Yes, well, Lex was the urgent thing here. He’d got away, after killing Toni Baines, and as soon as he realises that Lois is alive, of course he’s going to want to dispose of her too. So both Lois and Clark realise that they have to get him caught as soon as possible. The costume can wait.
As for the ‘making the costume’ bit. I’m really not sure that I want to write that; it’s been done before, very thoroughly in the series, and also with Lois involved by Chris Mulder in her fanzine story. So I think that may take place ‘offstage’, so to speak. Sorry!
Sherry said:
If I were Lois, I wouldn't work too hard to forget the kisses. I'd be asking for a few reminders in the very near future.
LOL!! Well, you never know...
S adds:
I loved the part where Lois is fighting her "inner urges" about Clark's kisses, it makes her keep her distance from the physical relationship long enough to really fall in love with Clark (which I ASSUME will happen over the course of the story -- hope, hope)
You never know, indeed! As LabRat has said on many an occasion, RAFO! (Read And Find Out <g>)
And Saskia says, on the same theme:
Lois doesn't want to kiss Clark again?? Noooo!!!!!!! You can't let that happen! Just look at those lips! Think of what more could happen between the two of you! (I'm talking of them becoming a couple, you know)
LOL! Sas, you’re getting soft! What’s happened to your calls for WHAMs? Don’t tell me that they’ve won you away from the dark (ie Tank <g>) side? Noooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
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If one or the other of you is a stickler for individuality, I thought you might want a heads up. Otherwise, I certainly see no reason to make a change, as the paragraphs are about 110% true to character and canon. 
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