Comments here please.

Bob

Awwwww. Loved it, especially the last part. And the investigation is moving along quite nicely.

Ready for the next chapter . . . .

Home

My first thought was Lex pulled some strings. The second was, that he has no reason to

Great part, Bob

Yeah, the infamous - "I forgot it was hot..."

So Bernie Klein is on the job! Yay! Things should move right along now.

And Clark is making a move, and Lois isn't sure, but she isn't slapping him down... good part.

Oh, you clever, clever man. I kept thinking that if they analyzed the audio feed that they'd be able to hear Lex Luthor's voice. Maybe once Clark's powers start to come back, he'll be able to pick up on the sounds and point out that there's something there. Oh well, it looks like this'll unfold differently than I expected.

Three cheers for Bernie, though. It's nice to see him showing his Superman loyalties, even though he believes that Superman didn't survive. And now he's given them two items that'll help prove Superman's innocence: a faulty signal and a suspicious piece of equipment.

Together with Clark's animosity toward Lex and the creepifying factor to Lois' apartment in the Ark, and it shouldn't take long for Lane and Kent to find out what really happened.

More soon!
BJ

Hi everyone. Thanks for reading.

c-mom:
I'm glad you liked the end. I think you'll find that the whole story will be moving along now.


Michael:


And I can't believe that in the middle of my WAFFY goodnight you were thinking of Lois and strategic knee placement.

Thanks for reading.


Dandello:
Yeah, I couldn't resist the "it's hot" humor. I figure that he's going to have to fight all kinds of subconscious actions.


Iolanthe:
This Lois has been through a lot that canon Lois never did. Beyond the general stresses of Nightfall, she's had the negative shocks of losing Superman and her apartment. Then she's come to know Clark and Lex. All in all I think it's more than enough to have her think about both Clark and her life a little differently.


BJ:
Lex's technical team was too clever for that.
1. Cut Superman's microphone.
2. Release the poison.
3. Play the message.
So, whatever failed, that part worked right.

But it *never* hurts to have Bernie Klein in your corner.

Thanks again, everyone.

Bob

I should have commented on this before, but I somehow missed that it was posted.

Anyway, good to see Lois, Clark and Bernie Klein make some progress, only if it is only a little bit of it! More soon, please! The supreme evil of Lex Luthor must be exposed.

Ann

I've learned to expect bad things to happen in a funny way? Or funny things to happen in a bad way? Or maybe that's just Muse's evil side coming through in innocent FDK-threads.

Michael

Lovely Bob.

Lois is enjoying much-more-straight-forward Clark.

So am I!

Corrina.

Hi Ann:
Thanks for the note. You had to know that I couldn't leave Bernie out. I wouldn't be surprised at all if they started making real progress.


Michael:
I have to admit that it would be funny for Lois to at least think of a defensive action.


Corrina:
It is fun to watch a Clark that can react naturally because he has not reason (that he knows of) to do anything differently.


Part 16 will be up shortly.
Bob