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Posted By: HappyGirl FDK: The Man Under the Suit, Part 25/31 - 01/20/10 12:37 PM
Yes, I know, we wanted to actually *see* the pheromone incident, but it would have bogged down the plot line. If anyone wants to write it as an in-betweenie, be my guest.

Besides, we'll get something better in the next part. blush
Posted By: carolm Re: FDK: The Man Under the Suit, Part 25/31 - 01/20/10 12:43 PM
/eyes inbox/

And where exactly is that?

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Ooooh, it's getting even better! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! hyper

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Elizabeth
EVIL cliffhanger!
This was a fine part. We've seen PML many times before. What we want to see is the Luthor/Awards weekend.


Elisabeth
Yay, feedback!

Carol--ummm...in my head, mostly.

Elizabeth--I'm glad you like it. We're getting to the good part soon.

c-mom-- Thank you. evil

Elisabeth--yeah, that was my thinking exactly.


Now for the fair warning: I just got a call for a one-year-old foster son who needs to be moved *tonight*. So if you don't hear from me for a while, you'll know why. It shouldn't be too long. If he doesn't sleep through the night already, he will soon. But, first things first, he needs lots of loving. Bottom line: I'll definitely be back, but not sure when. I'm sure you all understand that prirority system. laugh
Smallville was nice and I do admit, the PML-resolution was nice. grumble
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Michael
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Even if he tried, it wouldn’t work. I’m invulnerable.” The disquieting memory of yesterday’s brief dizzy spell after a false bank alarm flashed through Clark’s mind, but he quickly dismissed it as a fluke. There was certainly no reason to worry his friends about it.
Clark, Clark, Clark! When will you learn to tell things like this to Lois?

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It was still a small circle, but bigger than the ‘just the two of us’ one that Lois and Caleb had had before. It was only in retrospect that Lois realized how isolating sharing such a big secret could be.
Very good point, and it's a good thing that they do have Lana and Pete.

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Besides, it was hard to look heroic while eating Alice White’s tuna casserole or watching ‘Jailhouse Rock’ with Perry.
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The simple fact was that Clark knew he didn’t stand a chance if Lois Lane decided to seduce him. And, while he fully intended to be seduced by her one day soon, he wanted it to be when they were both sober enough to enjoy it and remember it afterward.
Yes, alas for the omission, but I'm glad that you're moving the story along.

OK - cliffhanger ending - now you've got me wondering!
Just a quick note to say that I haven't fallen off the face of the earth. The new baby is settling in well. However, this week just about everyone in the house (and there are eight of us) has been sick. That leaves zero creative energy for Mom at the end of the day. So, I shall return when everyone is better, which I certainly hope will be soon!
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Originally posted by HappyGirl:
Just a quick note to say that I haven't fallen off the face of the earth. The new baby is settling in well. However, this week just about everyone in the house (and there are eight of us) has been sick. That leaves zero creative energy for Mom at the end of the day. So, I shall return when everyone is better, which I certainly hope will be soon!
Get well soon, Hap! sloppy
Thank you, Queenie!

You can get the gory detailed update in part 24's feedback above.

You guys rock. laugh
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