I like it. You have a lot of nice emotion in here, and I can really hear these as Clark's thoughts. The final line makes you really ache for him.

I'm not sure what story it was supposed to be a prequel to, but I think I'd like to read it. Have you posted it, here or elsewhere? If so, I hope you'll post a link.

Hi Sarah,

This has a wonderful feel to it. I feel the fear in Clark's voice. I've always thought that was what dominated much of his relationship with Lois early on.

This seems to have a similar feel as your "From the Beginning." Is that the companion to this?

Bob

Hey guys, thanks for the feedback and I really appreciate that you like it. Now concerning which piece it's supposed to be a sequel to is actually, "Don't Leave Me" I couldn't put the link to it on my blackberry so you'll just have to do a search for it.

Thanks again for the feedback

Missed it by || much.

Here is the link to the rest: Don\'t Leave Me

Bob

Very sweet.

Nice introspection into Clark's fears

Michael