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Posted By: carolm FDK: Backwards III: House of Lane, 9/? - 08/07/09 12:45 PM
FDK goes here.

Probably no posts over the weekend but DH/2 kids are going camping Sunday so hopefully some writing time as I have about 6 more chapters done at the moment...

/me sighs...

Thanks!
Carol
Aha! So there is some angst in this story. At least it's just a small amount, and once Clark safely returns from his rescue, all will be well in the Backwards world.
Posted By: rkn Re: FDK: Backwards III: House of Lane, 9/? - 08/07/09 03:19 PM
Guess we knew that was coming! razz
Posted By: lcfan99 Re: FDK: Backwards III: House of Lane, 9/? - 08/07/09 07:09 PM
Carol, I have been loving this story, and the past two stories!

Poor Lois! Part of being married to Clark is having to deal with him being absent at times....

One question I was wondering about. How did Clark get his name? Traditionally, Clark is Martha's maiden name. Is it Ellen's maiden name in this story?
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"Superman is working like a man on a mission, Trina," the blonde correspondent said into the microphone. "I've seen him work a few times before but never like this."

"Why do you think that is?" the brunette on the other side of the split screen asked.

"Well, it's not that he never works hard – I certainly don't mean to suggest anything like that – but there seems to be an extra urgency to him tonight.
Ah, there is a large amount of unresolved sexual tension! This part was funny.

But then it segues off into Lois, alone on her wedding night, and realizing that this situation is likely to repeat itself. Poignant.

And is the marriage valid if it hasn't been consummated? I'm still remembering Star's warning.
Glad you liked the quotes, Carol smile Here we go again smile
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A long minute later, she pulled back as there was a sinking feeling in the pit of her stomach.
Losing altitude?
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"Oops." Clark looked chagrinned. "Guess I lost altitude there." He kissed her again, swiftly this time. "Let's get home before we do anymore of that."
laugh
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She closed her eyes as his face neared hers. First a slight brush of his lips against hers and then...

He was gone.
O-oh?
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I mean, technically, we've been married since last week but...
But that’s never stopped you before from waiting a couple more years…
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"Superman is working like a man on a mission, Trina," the blonde correspondent said into the microphone. "I've seen him work a few times before but never like this."
Hmm… All this excess energy makes Superman work faster, huh?
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She finally decided to take a long shower and see if she could figure out what to wear – besides her birthday suit – for what was essentially her wedding night.
White dress shirt?
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She put the thoughts out of her mind and eventually fell into a restless sleep.
So Zara still has time to intervene before bad things happen. After all, Lois was sent together with Clark to Earth. Only her name was Lor-El back than dizzy
Posted By: carolm Re: FDK: Backwards III: House of Lane, 9/? - 08/10/09 03:47 PM
Thanks guys smile .

Not much time. Am supposed to be cleaning kids rooms. I spent the weekend either not home or moving furniture/boxes around and I am beyond sore.

I did finish Ch. 16 on a break last night though smile .

More momentarily...
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