Good summary of the first part, Laura

And the problems with H202... lol!!!

Jose

Hi,

Great start.

More soon, please.

MAF

Laura

This is great.

Tricia

A promising first part! And a great title. I love it, Laura.

Ursie

Ooh, Laura, this does look interesting! And that tantalizing tidbit re Dr. Klein and marinara sauce...

One important question, though, before I commit myself to what looks like a fun ride. (Clark, you've eaten bombs. You've eaten LOIS' COOKING. Don't be such a baby. ) I absolutely adored your Reader's Digest version, quoted in full here:

You certainly nailed Herb's character down to a tee, but I must know, Laura! Will Herb be featured in this fic, or will it be confined strictly the repercussions happening in "our" universe? And if Herb is around, will it be only a cameo or two, or a major role? Please let me know, because I really do want to read this.

Hazel, the anti-Herb

Good start, Laura! I agree with Hazel re. wimp-Clark - just drink it already!

Okay, so he's now immune to Kryptonite, we hope. What's next??


Wendy

Thank you, Jose, Maria, Tricia, Ursie, Hazel, and Wendy for your comments .

Yes, he is a big baby, but that's not the real reason he's resisting drinking the peroxide. Tricia nailed my thinking precisely . . .

Thank you! I almost forgot that I had written that! It sort of does describe Wells perfectly, though. I have to say, he is gone in this story except there is a hint of him in the epilogue. He never actually shows his face, though. Since the story is already written this time, I can assure you of that.

I hope this story doesn't let you down. It is really just a lot of fluff that I tried to make sort of funny . . . don't know if I succeeded, though .

Part 2 will be posted shortly .

Laura:

I'm catching up. Hadn't read 'Medical Miracles,' so am a bit behind, but really enjoying, and wanted you to know I'm reading! On to part 2...

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