Feedback here.

Thanks in advance.

Awk! Now I know where the title comes from--your readers are going to have so many questions until you finally put us out of our misery! The plot has turned EVIL. Where is Clark?

Oh no ... what have you done ... and why did you leave us there?

Poor Lois!

It is Tempus, is it?

Can't wait for the next part!

evil.

enough said

Loving it. And am really scared. What did you do to Clark

The get-away is fun and is it tomorrow yet?


Ignore the labeling. I just googled and the house struck a cord after seeing the cottage

Michael

cookiesmom - thanks for your feedback. Yep, there are a lot of questions coming - but the early parts had questions too ... like 'Will you marry me?'

Kathryn - Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it. You're right ... poor Lois.

Sarah - I was hoping a little evil would be OK after 3 parts of sunshine Thanks for leaving FDK.

Michael - Loved the pic Michael.

It is tomorrow and assuming no problems, Part 5 will be posted tonight.

Corrina.