FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/17/09 11:23 PM
Feedback here.
Many thanks.
Many thanks.
Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/18/09 06:52 AM
That was one of the sweetest, most romantic proposal scenes I have ever read! I can't wait for the next installment!!
Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/18/09 08:49 AM
That was so great! Your descriptions of everything are so vivid.
But I can't handle the cliffhanger! What is it?!?
I'm very glad you are on a frequent posting schedule!
Amber
But I can't handle the cliffhanger! What is it?!?
I'm very glad you are on a frequent posting schedule!
Amber
Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/18/09 12:06 PM
You can't leave us there! I'm wondering what he has in his hand, and there is something else?
I liked how Clark put everything in place for Lois. He is so sweet!
Post the next part soon, please!
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That’s one down and two to go.
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If it goes horribly wrong, can you try to remember that it was never my intention to upset you?
Post the next part soon, please!
Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/18/09 08:34 PM
That proposal was truly magnificent! 
However, I think the more "fun" parts were my favorites:and For both of these I keep seeing the look of horror on Clark's face. 
An finally, like everyone else I am wondering about what is in his hand.
I'm looking forward to the next part but I sill have my shields up. (Once burned and all that...)
Bob
However, I think the more "fun" parts were my favorites:
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“I have the solution,” Lois announced, grinning.
“You do?” he asked, eyebrows raised.
“Celibate marriage.”
“You do?” he asked, eyebrows raised.
“Celibate marriage.”
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On one condition,” Lois said, with a teasing smile. “I set the length of our engagement.”
“OK.”
“I’ll give you two options ... you can choose.”
He nodded his agreement.
“Three years ... or four.”
Clark gulped. Blushed. Seemed to stop breathing. “*Three* years,” he gasped. He was trying so hard not to look horrified.
“OK.”
“I’ll give you two options ... you can choose.”
He nodded his agreement.
“Three years ... or four.”
Clark gulped. Blushed. Seemed to stop breathing. “*Three* years,” he gasped. He was trying so hard not to look horrified.
An finally, like everyone else I am wondering about what is in his hand.
I'm looking forward to the next part but I sill have my shields up. (Once burned and all that...)
Bob
Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/18/09 09:19 PM
Melray - so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your FDK.
Amber - this is a good cliffhanger. And hopefully, it'll be posted later this afternoon.
Thanks for your comments.
Kathryn - thanks! Yes, I can leave you there ... but not for long!
Yes, Clark is sweet - that's one of the reasons he's such fun to write.
Bob - Thanks for your comments.
I could see the look on Clark's face too!
In your FDK for Adrift, you said you were worried the delay in the engagement might cause problems. You'll note that, despite your suggestion, I refrained from evil!
There will be some angst, but it will be different to Adrift.
Amber - this is a good cliffhanger. And hopefully, it'll be posted later this afternoon.
Thanks for your comments.
Kathryn - thanks! Yes, I can leave you there ... but not for long!
Yes, Clark is sweet - that's one of the reasons he's such fun to write.
Bob - Thanks for your comments.
I could see the look on Clark's face too!
In your FDK for Adrift, you said you were worried the delay in the engagement might cause problems. You'll note that, despite your suggestion, I refrained from evil!
There will be some angst, but it will be different to Adrift.
Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/19/09 03:26 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww and you sure are piling up questions here, Corrina 
I expected Lois demanding they elope 
Boy, Clark and Lois are going to be quite a bit frustrated during the next few weeks. Poor Jimmy. Poor Perry. Poor criminals
This. Is. Not. Funny. At. All. 
Michael
I expected Lois demanding they elope Quote
Lois tightened her hold on his neck, wanting to never let him go. Her mouth waltzed with his and her response slithered lower. Then she remembered ... they were going to wait.
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“You want me to guess what it is?” Lois asked.
Clark smiled hesitantly. “No, I’m trying to work up the courage to give it to you.”
Clark smiled hesitantly. “No, I’m trying to work up the courage to give it to you.”
Michael
Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) - 07/19/09 04:12 PM
Michael - Thanks so much for all your wonderful feedback, Michael.
The towel was mostly about Lois's comfort - although Clark was busy preparing the food while she changed so it also protected both of them if his eyes inadvertently wandered. With the screen, he had to deliberately look - which they both knew he wouldn't do.
Maybe not, but that comment is
Corrina.
The towel was mostly about Lois's comfort - although Clark was busy preparing the food while she changed so it also protected both of them if his eyes inadvertently wandered. With the screen, he had to deliberately look - which they both knew he wouldn't do.
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This. Is. Not. Funny. At. All.
Corrina.