FDK: All the Daytime and the Nighttime, Part 6 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Hi Artemis

Thanks, HG.

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From an airplane, right

You got it!
More to come!

Artemis

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Suddenly, Henderson stopped in thought. Wait, how had Kent gotten from the Metro Club to the Apollo and up to his fourth floor room to rescue his suitcase? Maybe he had it with him at work. But then, why come to the Apollo to give it to him?

Is Henderson going to think about this a lot? It could give away Clark's secret, if Henderson obsesses about it and if Superman goes public, yes? Or will Henderson forget about it in all the hoopla which is to come with the Toasters?

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Unfortunately he was still in his bartending clothes and the white sleeves of his shirt were visible in the feeble light in this area.

Clark has to think of these things.

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Clark could hear the 451 – arson - call from a nearing police car

Is this shades of "Fahrenheit 451"?

Hi Iolanthe, glad you are enjoying this. Yes, Clark being a busy guy in a big city has to start thinking of these things.

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Is this shades of "Fahrenheit 451"?

That, I don't know and really didn't think of. It's just part of a list of police codes I have.
314-Indecent Exposure; 415-Fight, noise, offensive words, etc. I don't know how widespread these are, but it seemed like something good to use

Glad you are interested! More to come.

Artemis

I love that this Clark has a military training background. I agree with another poster who said it seems to make him more confident. And that was a very clever way to disable the Toasters

I like that Lou has a little bit more personality
than he did in the show.

Looking forward to more!
Amber

Hi Artemis!

Great part!

Henderson snooping around was fun and the poem reminding Clark of staying humble was a nice touch.

Of course, now the poor guy is disappointed in Toni, but what did he expect?

And Lois noticed the tower

Michael

Thanks for the comments amberlea and DM. Unfortunately plans went awry and real life reared its head, so things will be a bit delayed, but they are coming!

Artemis

love this story. I'm not the best at fdk, but I try to pop my head in when i have the time or urge. can't wait for the next part!

Got some work done on the story since I got home. Internet was intermittent where I was at. So Part 7 is up. Yes, Clark has hidden his abilities all his life and gotten pretty good at it. Soon he will have to go public on the next adventure.
Stay tuned!

Artemis