I hope everyone enjoys this little slice of life. I wrote it just today, so hopefully there aren't too many errors. And hopefully it doesn't make your teeth ache ... I admit I had to fight my TDASC tendencies in a couple spots <g> but hopefully the end result is balanced enough to be worth it.

All comments appreciated.

Kathy

Aww, Kathy, that was so sweet... very Clark-like to want to take care of Lois, and the awkward touches about Dan added just the right amount of tension

PJ
who should really be writing her own fic, instead, but couldn't resist this short thing

<Sigh>!

What a perfect little pick-me-up story for a gray fall day! I loved Clark being so sweet and Lois letting him take care of her.

Especially loved the home-made macaroni and cheese. My first thought was about the Blue Box, too. I guess Lois and I think alike - homemade stuff is pretty fancy.

Good job, Kathy. I'm impressed that this is just a little something you threw together in one day! Pretty amazing.


Lynn

Nice story Kathy

Jose

Another WAFFy sweetie of a fic. You people are really, really dangerous.

Clark was so... well, Clark. And LOL at the whole DP knowing they could go to him for info on Lois! Until he asked so cluelessly, I was assuming it was post S4, and that LnC were married. But this works out much, much better.

...A man who cleans bathrooms. If that's not a sign of true love, I don't know what is.

Hazel, who might have to join Tank in looking for those insulin meds

Wow, Kathy! This is great!

Right from the time when Clark is wondering why everyone assumes he's up-to-date on Lois's condition, to that perfect ending, I was completely hooked That scene in the supermarket was expertly done - I loved the fact that he calls Lois 'his girlfriend' So perfectly in character, and awwww, at the way he takes care of her!!

This was wonderful, Kathy! Don't leave it too long till your next fic, huh?

Sara

Oh, I love it! You are so sweet.

I think my favorite part might have been everyone at the paper assuming he was checking in on her. And I loved that he thought momentarily about not calling her just to prove them wrong, but gave up on that almost immediately.

His foray into women's magazine's was great too. And I loved hearing him refer to Lois as "my girlfriend."

The fact that Clark came to stay and help and do errands while Dan just stood in the doorway. Even if Clark weren't Superman, we all know he'd have braved her germs to take care of her.

This was exactly what I needed to get me through my day at work today. I admit, I'd rather have read it laying in bed, but it's been a great pick me up.

Thanks!
Annie

Awww! Kathy, thank you so much!!! And feeling as if I have an appetite again, but nothing seems tempting enough.

Like everyone else, I adored everyone asking Clark how Lois is and his complete cluelessness as to why they come to him for news.

As for macaroni cheese, doesn't everyone make their own? /me almost made it for dinner tonight <g>

Great choice of films! Really nice. Oh, and these lines:

were the absolute perfect finish. Wonderful!!!


Wendy (who is definitely beginning to feel better now! )

Kathy,

Loved the story. It's going on my hard drive, so that the next time I have the flu which is usually once or twice a year, I can pull this out for a quick pick-me-up.

It was all soooo perfect. The only thing better would be to have Clark visit me.

Barb.

nice

That was wonderful! Perfectly sweet.

Awww. No, it wasn't exactly what I had in mind, but it's beautiful. )

Laura

Kathy,
nice and waffy
loved it
merry

A bane to diabetics everywhere.

Tank (who thinks that Kathy and Gerry are trying to kill him)

Hi,

Beautiful.

ADORABLE!!

I wish my husband had such good ideas when I'm sick..*sigh*

~Liz

What a waffy story! It made me forget abt my miserable 3 month old sinus infection for a while! Thank you so much!

one comment:
He forgot the Double Fudge Cruch bars!

Awwww! Very, very sweet, Kathy! I also loved the subtle message in the end, when Lois finally takes some sort of decision regarding Clark and Dan. Yay!!

Annie and Wendy, feel better, you two!

Kaethel

Wow, Kathy! Thank you for this. It´s just perfect...
Sil

Kathy, that was so sweet! Good thing I love all things sugary from candy to cookies to WAFFs . Gosh, I need to find a boyfriend like Clark -- he isn't even her boyfriend yet and he is still so amazing!

- Laura

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. <snuffle> Lovely, Kathy. I love these little slice of life moments and this one is just adorable. Made me quite nostalgic for being sick. (Stuart has distinct Clark tendancies when I'm sick, which makes it almost fun <g>)

)

Kathy

This is wonderful.
I love it!

Tricia

What a perfect title for a perfectly sweet story!

Ursie

Aw how sweet! I also hope Wendy and anyone else who caught the flu is feeling all better. Laura

Thank you, everyone, for your wonderful comments. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Sorry for any skyrocketing insulin levels. <g>

Thanks for the great feedback!

Kathy