FDK, Reflections - Part 21 - 04/28/09 04:29 PM
Sorry it's taking so long, but real life gets in the way (in the form of teenagers at home). Plus I just got a new Granddaughter! Anyway, any comments here would be appreciated.
Max
Max
Re: FDK, Reflections - Part 21 - 04/28/09 05:10 PM
You're back! Can't wait to see what's next!
Congratulations on your granddaughter!
Congratulations on your granddaughter!
Re: FDK, Reflections - Part 21 - 04/29/09 08:03 AM
Ack! Of course Lois has been kidnapped -- Clark has just decided to see if a relationship with her is possible.
Loved the scene in the newsroom, by the way. Lois noticing, mulling over and then mentioning the mud in his hair was great.
Congrats on the new little one!
Loved the scene in the newsroom, by the way. Lois noticing, mulling over and then mentioning the mud in his hair was great.
Congrats on the new little one!
Re: FDK, Reflections - Part 21 - 04/29/09 04:15 PM
Yay at last! And *naturally* Lois has been kidnapped and I suppose it's a Luthor thing 
Re: FDK, Reflections - Part 21 - 05/01/09 02:39 AM
Congrats 
Loved the mud-piece and I think it's great they're both so observant of the other, what with him noticing her cream soda can filled trash bin.
Lunkhead...
Talk about getting surprised 
Michael
Loved the mud-piece and I think it's great they're both so observant of the other, what with him noticing her cream soda can filled trash bin.
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“Oh, so you don’t think of her in that way?” his mom asked in a pseudo innocent voice.
“No… well, kind of … I mean, no I can’t.”
“Because?”
“Because, I could never give her a normal life. I couldn’t stop helping people just because I wanted that kind of relationship, and it wouldn’t be fair to her for her to have share my time with the rest of the world. Besides the fact I couldn’t give her a family.”
“No… well, kind of … I mean, no I can’t.”
“Because?”
“Because, I could never give her a normal life. I couldn’t stop helping people just because I wanted that kind of relationship, and it wouldn’t be fair to her for her to have share my time with the rest of the world. Besides the fact I couldn’t give her a family.”
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Lois had been kidnapped, and he had no clue how to find her.
Michael
Re: FDK, Reflections - Part 21 - 05/07/09 03:37 PM
loved it. now get back here so we know what happens
Re: FDK, Reflections - Part 21 - 05/19/09 06:32 PM
Thanks for the feedback. Part 22 is in Beta Read right now. Should be posting soon
Max
Max