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Lois stared into his eyes as he rested his weight on his elbows.

"You remember?" she whispered, tears filling her eyes.

He hesitated then nodded. "I remember you. The sandbox. 'Rescuing' Lana. Kissing you and telling you I was going to marry you."

So, the informal poll for the next fic...

A: Someone Else's Dreams: OTOH III, first 9.5 chapters done and 3.5 later chapters

B: Eureka Spring Fic [no that's not the real title [Wink] ]: Lois and Clark meet in the little Arkansas town a year or two before the pilot - and before Claude, first 8.5 chapters done

C: HoL rewrite: the one the muse is currently most interested in, 1 chapter done [though not beta'd yet and am a bit worried that part of it is going to be deemed... unnecessary or something and then back to the drawing board - and yes, the parts I were worried about being unnecessary may be so... I'm looking forward to writing it but may be a while before I can post].

Current vote tally:

A: 2.8
B: 4.5
C: 2.1

[That's 1 point for preference, .5 for second choice [for those who gave an order] and .3 for third choice. This is totally scientific you know...]

Thanks

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Carol

HURRAY!!!!!!!!!!! About time! Guess it took a really good kiss to bring it back.

(What's a laundry sorter? All I have are 3 baskets)

I sense a wonderful conclusion coming.

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He stopped the feverish kiss, resting his forehead on hers, both of them out of breath. "I remember," he whispered.

This was such a sweet way to finish this part.

I'm really glad they both finally took some decisive actions towards fixing this mess.

Can't wait for the last part.

Wowzers!!!! Lois woke the Sleeping Beauty with a kiss!!!

(Well, not entirely, but you know what I mean....)

And now we are all looking forward to the happy conclusion! party

As for your next fic, Carol, write whichever you muse is most interested in!

Ann

Yay!!!!

PS. I have done the crosscountry-driving. Once a direct shot from New Hampshire to San Diego in 3 1/2 days and once the scenic route from San Diego back east with stops in San Francisco, Las Vegas, New Orleans, Washington DC etc. The latter took 2 weeks and was an awesome experience. Got to meet some FoLCs along the way too.

Michael

Carol love it!!!!! I'm out the water an free and so is Clark. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Oh nice Carol! Love it. Laura

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Yay, I get to read it!!

Awesome part, Carol! It was nice to see Clark actually making an effort to get to know Lois again. And certainly wonderful that he's starting to remember. Looking forward to a happy ending!

I am so glad that both sets of parents handled their first fight well. It could have been very easy for them to intrude or cause problems for the couple further on down the road.

Clark is trying so hard to be a good husband. I'm not sure if Lois notices, though. For one thing, she doesn't realize how hard it is to treat her respectfully when all he wants to do is ogle the fun parts.

I wonder how Lois will interpret his final statement. Will she think that he remembers everything? Or will she realize that he remembers something?

Elisabeth

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He stopped the feverish kiss, resting his forehead on hers, both of them out of breath. "I remember," he whispered.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Bob

What a wonderful way to remember!

Very nice part, Carol!

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"Then you make new memories," Jonathan told him. "Start dating her again, for real, and not just the moderately uncomfortable double date with Pete and Abby where you talk around a lot of issues but never actually get to know Lois. Fall in love with her all over again."

It's about bloody time! I'm hoping if I ever get amnesia, it doesn't take me months to say to my husband, "Hey! Let's go make some new memories." Where's that clue x 4...

Great part,
JD

Hm, so does he remember everything, or just that piece? Well, either way, I don't think it will be long now.

The remembering scene was superb!!! Loved it!!!

And if you are still counting, Eureka Springs fic please. Although anything will do... as long as you post

Thanks everyone!!!

Karen - same idea, one unit

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Female Hawk - glad you liked it!

Ann - Thought you'd enjoy that

. Muse cooperated a bit yesterday...

Natascha - Glad you're here! Yeah - I can't seem to write a non-pregnant Lois recently :p .

Michael -

Lovesuper - it's coming!

Laura - thanks!

Rona - just for you

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Elisabeth - They're both still in a weird space I think. Conclusion coming up shortly!

Bob - awww - don't let your head hurt!

Fuzzy - there are worse things than making out with one's spouse, I suppose...

JD - LOL! Here's hoping you just never get amnesia!

Amy - it's coming!

AnKS - thanks. the muse worked on it last night

Current vote tally:

A: 2.8
B: 5.5
C: 2.1

[That's 1 point for preference, .5 for second choice [for those who gave an order] and .3 for third choice. This is totally scientific you know...]

So it's a good thing the muse finally started working on 'B' again last night!

More in the next FDK thread...

Conclusion coming in a few

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Carol