FDK: A Dream Come True (1/1) - 03/31/09 07:15 AM
I don't see a feedback thread for this and it truly deserves one. A very good story.
Re: FDK: A Dream Come True (1/1) - 03/31/09 07:54 AM
beautiful and lovely
Re: FDK: A Dream Come True (1/1) - 03/31/09 12:42 PM
It is lovely. And I think not identifying the speaker is an excellent idea. This could be Lois/Clark, or Perry/Alice, or Jonathan/Martha, or Jimmy/Lucy, or any number of other couples. The ambiguity adds to the sense of mystery. I like it.
Whoever does the GE work on this one won't have to do much. It's just beautiful as is.
Whoever does the GE work on this one won't have to do much. It's just beautiful as is.
Re: FDK: A Dream Come True (1/1) - 04/01/09 09:15 AM
This is just beautiful.
When I read it there was no doubt in my mind that it was Lois. (However, that is probably just me bringing my own preconceptions to the piece.)
Bob
When I read it there was no doubt in my mind that it was Lois. (However, that is probably just me bringing my own preconceptions to the piece.)
Bob
Re: FDK: A Dream Come True (1/1) - 04/01/09 03:55 PM
Very sweet 
Michael
Michael
Re: FDK: A Dream Come True (1/1) - 04/03/09 11:44 AM
Thanks a lot everyone. I'm really glad you liked it. 