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Posted By: daneel FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 01:39 PM
Yay!!! smile1

Ghosts haunting Lex!! wave
Posted By: MissyG Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 01:48 PM
Woohoo, Wendy!!

You're my hero!!

I love that they have connected 'after death'. But even more that they are able to fixe things and return to the life and loves that they love!

Great job!

Missy
Posted By: Kaethel Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 01:55 PM
Woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! smile1

And you managed to include a smoochie!

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“In just a minute,” Lois said. She picked herself up and moved over to Clark. “If we only have today, I don’t want to waste any more time...”

“I don’t understand.”

“This,” she said, raising herself on tip-toes and suddenly discovered that she could float. Sliding her arms around Clark’s neck, she kissed him soundly.
I was going "awww" at this so I barely growled at the next line:

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And you know how growly I usually get at thingies.

But then... then...

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A few hours later, the two ghosts sat surrounded by...
Crumpled sheets? After making soul-shattering, passionate love to make up for lost time?

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piles of paper.
Wendy!!!!!!!!!!!!! Even dead they're not following my arrows! razz

Still, I enjoyed reading about their investigation to bring down Luthor, and particularly this:

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“Henderson!”

He looked up again, then scratched his head. “I could’ve sworn... Sounded exactly like Lois Lane...”

“It *is* Lois, you dumb excuse for a cop!” she exclaimed.

“Now *that* sounds exactly like Lois!” he muttered.
laugh

Kaethel smile
Posted By: Karen Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 02:02 PM
YAY! Not only does everyone get revenge on Lex, but they find a way to come back! Good old Doc Hamilton! YAY smile1
Posted By: Meerkat Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 02:34 PM
Trust Wendy to be able to fix things and make life perfect for our favorite couple.

Of course... if Lois and Clark are cloned, won't it just be their bodies that are cloned, not their souls? Unless... they attack the bodies and take over! Eek! Could be a fun event for next Halloween! Yay!

Anyway, nice job, Wendy. Managed to include romance, a-plot, hauntings, and Lex getting what he deserved (as well as a nice time with Henderson). smile
Posted By: BarbP Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 02:38 PM
Wendy -- the great fixer upper.

Wonderfully done.


Barb.
Posted By: Elena Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 03:03 PM
Wendy, Wendy, Wendy... what happened to the good ole "If it ain't broken, don't fix it!"????? razz

El [Linked Image]
Posted By: CC Aiken Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 04:00 PM
Leave it to the brilliant Wendy Richards to reattach Lois' head, sort of.

And to approach TOGOM from an entirely original, and I feel safe in saying never been done before, angle.

CC- who has a weakness for any story involving clones. I know, it's weird.
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 05:09 PM
I liked Tank's part, but this is equally good wink
Congratulations, Wendy, for taking such a good advantage of Halloween smile

AnnaBtG. smile1
Posted By: Tank Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 07:26 PM
Seems like there is no way to defeat Lois and Clark. Not even death can keep them down. (I seem to remember having to use a similar ploy in a challenge fic some time back).

Even though this was NOT meant as a challenge fic ( wink ), it seems Wendy has just obsoleted the genre since she's shown that Lois and Clark can't even be killed permenantly.

I guess that means that I can only write happy, fluffy stories from now on or Wendy will 'fix' them for me, laugh . But since that is no fun, I guess I'll just have to retire.

The evil fic has been obsoleted, and so have I.

Tank (who was thinking of trying to make a writing come back but realizes now that it would be a futile and fruitless endevor)
Posted By: Nqoire Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 10/31/03 09:58 PM
Tank's threatening retirement, again wink That means lots of good stories for us readers smile

Awesome job fixing Tank's lovely mess, Wendy. I am constanly amazed at your creativity!
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/01/03 02:07 AM
Yay, Wendy! smile1

Thanks for fixing this mess. thumbsup

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I guess that means that I can only write happy, fluffy stories from now on
What a good idea!! rotflol

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The evil fic has been obsoleted, and so have I.
No way, Tank! :p

I look forward to lots more Tank/Wendy challenges. jump

Tricia cool
Posted By: Kaethel Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/01/03 06:54 AM
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I guess I'll just have to retire.
Try that, Tank, and I'll set El (and her guillotine) loose on you! razz

Kaethel evil
Posted By: Saskia Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/01/03 12:19 PM
Nice 'fix', Wendy. I'm not surprised you brought out TOGOM, but it sure is a good solution. And there were even smoochies!

But if you don't mind me, I prefer Tank's Halloween fic. For obvious reasons. laugh

Saskia
Posted By: gerry Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/01/03 05:00 PM
Way to go, Wendy!

gerry
Posted By: KathyB Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/01/03 05:26 PM
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Note: Eagle-eyed readers will notice that I've played around with the timeline just a touch here, but I hope you'll forgive me!
Forgive you? Forgive you?? Heck, I salute you! smile1

Great job, Wendy. LOL, it just shows how no one can keep L&C down. And to bring it all back to TOGOM was even better. Just when we thought there was no new ways to rewrite that episode! laugh

Nicely done, you two, even if this wasn't supposed to be a true challenge fic. smile

Kathy
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/01/03 06:02 PM
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But since that is no fun, I guess I'll just have to retire.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

AnnaBtG.
Posted By: amciotola Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/01/03 06:51 PM
Long Live Wonderful Wendy!!

Tank, you're Evil with a capital E (El you better watch out for your Evil crown)

<G>
Posted By: merry Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/03/03 01:07 PM
Bravo Wendy
very well done
merry
Posted By: Xanabee Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/04/03 03:10 AM
LOL, Kaethel, your FDK had me in as many stitches as Wendy's story had. smile1
Posted By: Wendymr Re: FDK-Lex Loses (or Fixed!!!) - 11/05/03 12:14 PM
Just dropping in to say a very quick thanks to all of you for your wonderful feedback on this little piece of nonsense. I'm glad you liked it - and even gladder that it cheered a few of you up! wink

Elena...
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Wendy, Wendy, Wendy... what happened to the good ole "If it ain't broken, don't fix it!"?????
goofy I'm sure you have lots of very evil ideas for how you could go about it! <g>

Tank, my friend, I'm sorry for spoiling your party once more. cat But you have to admit that Lois and Clark really are much better when they're alive and working together to bring down criminals such as Luthor (apologies, Mr Luthor, if you're reading this, but you really have to face the truth about your nature some time. Why not now? :rolleyes: ). Even as ghosts, Tank, the two of them won't be beaten!

As for the TOGOM fix, I could say that I just couldn't resist. wink Actually, though, the truth is that it was the only way I could think of to bring them back to life again - especially since I didn't want to use the clichéd deus ex machina of HG Wells yet again. And in the absence of someone like Albus Dumbledore - and even he says that he can't bring the dead back to life - there wasn't much choice. So TOGOM it was.

(That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it!)

And now, the only question is (and it's Tank's call) should this duo:

(a) not go to the Archive at all
(b) go, but as two separate stories
or (c) go as one combined story?


Wendy smile
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