FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/16/09 12:04 PM
Any comments? Working on Chapter 20. Still uncertain on the total length.
Thanks for reading the story so far...
Max
Thanks for reading the story so far...
Max
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/16/09 12:38 PM
I think the story is great!
I hope that Clark will be able to trust Lois and open up to her.
For once it is the other way round!
Although the attraction is very obviously still there...
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Fuzzy
I hope that Clark will be able to trust Lois and open up to her.
For once it is the other way round!
Although the attraction is very obviously still there...
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Fuzzy
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/16/09 02:37 PM
I absolutely loved this chapter. It was beautiful especially
“You are lonely.”
Clark stared him directly in eyes, surprised. Michel had voiced the thought he had not dared to think himself. “Yes.”
“My friend, even for one who can do such things as you can do, you need someone to fill in the empty spaces. Even with the joy my café brings me, I cannot imagine life with my amor. To be whole, you must let someone be what you cannot.”
“Can I do that to someone?”
“I do not believe you are such a horrible person.”
“You know what I mean. My life can be… difficult.”
“I think that is up to her to decide. Besides, anyone who can break though the ghost of that devil must be a strong woman.”
Clark was even more surprised. “I’m not sure what you mean.”
“Come on, my friend. I have heard of your exploits in America. You come here just to get croissants? You never ask for my sweet ones. She is the one that makes you sad, no?”
"Clark stared at out at Michel’s patrons, then without looking back at him replied sadly, “Oui.”
"No burden is so great that it cannot be shared by the right person.”
“How do you know who is that right person?”
“When you see your heart reflected in her eyes.”"
It about made me cry. it was such a moving scene.
Hurry up with the next part. Please
“You are lonely.”
Clark stared him directly in eyes, surprised. Michel had voiced the thought he had not dared to think himself. “Yes.”
“My friend, even for one who can do such things as you can do, you need someone to fill in the empty spaces. Even with the joy my café brings me, I cannot imagine life with my amor. To be whole, you must let someone be what you cannot.”
“Can I do that to someone?”
“I do not believe you are such a horrible person.”
“You know what I mean. My life can be… difficult.”
“I think that is up to her to decide. Besides, anyone who can break though the ghost of that devil must be a strong woman.”
Clark was even more surprised. “I’m not sure what you mean.”
“Come on, my friend. I have heard of your exploits in America. You come here just to get croissants? You never ask for my sweet ones. She is the one that makes you sad, no?”
"Clark stared at out at Michel’s patrons, then without looking back at him replied sadly, “Oui.”
"No burden is so great that it cannot be shared by the right person.”
“How do you know who is that right person?”
“When you see your heart reflected in her eyes.”"
It about made me cry. it was such a moving scene.
Hurry up with the next part. Please
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/16/09 02:49 PM
Great part again! Keep it coming.
Artemis
Artemis
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/17/09 04:51 AM
Great part! Loving the path this story is taking.
Andreia
Andreia
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/18/09 12:30 PM
Love this story! I keep checking every day for the next part....
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/18/09 05:01 PM
Great chapter and the cafe-owner knowing was quite the curve-ball.
Michael
Michael
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/27/09 08:00 AM
Can we expect more soon? Please??
Re: FDK - Reflections 19 - 03/29/09 08:06 AM
Next part in the works. My work schedule just got crazy, so I have a little less time for writing right now. But I'm working away at Part 20 right now.
Max
Max