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Posted By: ChiefPam FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 10:52 AM
Hee, more disguises! Love the Spike and Angel routine, and what lovely mental images... drool

Go, Lois! Glad she's working with Henderson on this one; they'll need all their evidence to be air tight and totally legit.

PJ
Posted By: carolm Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 11:27 AM
Ugh. Way too short. Way, way too short.

More soon please!

And I loved the Spike/Angel stuff!

Carol
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 11:35 AM
Great part.
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I drool and lick my lips as my eyes linger somewhere lower than his intellect.
I loved this!
Keep it coming!
cool
Artemis
Posted By: Elisabeth Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 12:02 PM
The punchline was fabulous.


Elisabeth
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 02:05 PM
Spike and Angel are always fun and you added Henderson into the mix clap

Michael
Posted By: amberlea Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 04:38 PM
I don't know exactly what I thought was going to happen, but I didn't see that coming. I guess I thought they were just recording Black for evidence, but it was even better that he was arrested on the spot. It seems like this event begins the countdown clock, though - they can't have much time before Lex hears about this and they lose their advantage.

Angel and Spike were great, and Henderson made it even better!

Amber
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 05:54 PM
That sentence that Artemis quoted made me splutter my coffee, too! clap

Spike and Angel were great, as everybody has said, and I loved the effect that the former had on the latter! laugh

This part was A-plot heavy, however, which always has a stunting effect on my feedback.... wink

Ann
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 07:25 PM
Ditto everyone else. Loved having a Spike and Angel appearance!

Drooling for more,
JD
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/02/09 09:30 PM
They have come out of hiding now - the word will get out about Lois soon enough! How will Lex react when he realizes she's "betrayed" him?

Also glad to see that Clark is an excellent bodyguard. Of course, he would be.

Do they have enough to bring Lex down?
Posted By: Nan Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/03/09 07:11 AM
Lol! Angel and Spike! <g>

Actually, if Henderson keeps John Black under wraps, I don't see why Luthor has to learn about the fake kidnapping, at least right away. Still, I think they're running on borrowed time. I hope Lois knows what she's doing.

Nan
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/03/09 11:00 AM
I'm just hoping that Lex still takes a dive, otherwise I don't think anyone will be safe.

James
Posted By: bobbart Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/03/09 06:19 PM
Like everyone else, I *love* the Angel and Spike stuff. clap

However, I was confused by this:
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“You think the Boss is scary?” Henderson asks, flashing a quick glance at me and shaking his head. “He hasn’t got anything on the Missus.”
This seemed awfully casual of Henderson. The secret that Lois was actively working against Lex should have remained a "need to know" secret. Up to that point, all that anyone other than Henderson needed to know was that there was a woman working with Henderson to go after The Boss. It seems to me that making that revelation was both cavalier and dangerous. They gave up potentially critical information for no return.

Bob
Posted By: BJ Re: FDK: Master of Disguise, pt 13 - 03/04/09 06:49 AM
Thanks for the lovely feedback, FoLCs. I'm glad to read that you all liked seeing Spike and Angel show up, as well as Henderson. Also, thanks for laughing in the right places. laugh

Just a couple of things...
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seems like this event begins the countdown clock
True, Amber. From here to the end, things really start moving pretty quickly. Hang on tightly.

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This part was A-plot heavy
Sorry, Ann. Although the a-plot supported the b-plot through much of the story, that changes now to get things concluded in a (hopefully) satisfactory manner.
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How will Lex react when he realizes she's "betrayed" him?
Mwah ha ha!
goofy
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I'm just hoping that Lex still takes a dive, otherwise I don't think anyone will be safe.
Quite right. Stay with me to find out...
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This seemed awfully casual of Henderson. The secret that Lois was actively working against Lex should have remained a "need to know" secret.
Hmm. Thanks for the comments, Bob. It just seemed like such a 'Henderson' thing to say, so I had him say it. Without giving anything away, I can say that it doesn't negatively affect Lois & Clark.

Stay tuned for the next part.
Brenda
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