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Cute. I'm really glad they cleared up their misconceptions.

This bothers me a little, though.
I understand he's trying to make a joke to lighten the situation. And he's trying to make Lois feel better about herself. That's sweet.

But honestly, if he expects Lois to continue to look "starry-eyed" at him, he's got another thing coming! That's not real love.

*smiles*

Yay, CG! I'm happy that all ended well with them! Please make sure you do the epilogue!

~Kel

Sara I'm sort of glad you brought that up. Actually, this Lois is slightly different from the one we usually see. I hope people, and psychoanalysts, don't mind her being this way.

In my story, Lois says:
She's feeling insecure that her feelings for Superman might stand in their way, even though they were genuine from her point of view. Clark's reassuring her that he's okay with her love for Superman (hey, it's for him!) by making light of this issue that's resting heavy on her heart. (He did not, nor would he ever, make light of the love between them.)
Had she tried to defend herself and said something like, 'Hell, Clark. Don't doubt my feelings for Superman because he's, after all, you!' then probably Clark would have to have dealt with it differently. But, the Lois here is already in despair, and didn't need Clark piling up accusations on her of giving Superman starry-eyed looks.

And, he did get smacked for his joke.

Besides, you can't deny he didn't like all that hero-worship from his one true love. Heck, he did come back for more again, and again.

I hope you're convinced...

Again with the WOW and THANK YOU!!

Great story. So dang sweet and I like this Lois. Of course she'd have the insecurity of thinking that Clark could get 'anyone' because well, it's kind of true. Loved how Clark 'reassured' her also!

Thank you again for taking my too specific fic requirements and giving me a wonderful ficcie! Next time I'll make it a little bit more vague, LOL. I do love Top Copy reveals though and I wrote my own All Shook Up reveal for this ficathon, LOL.

I think I'm going to go read it again.

Well done, Coolgirl! Totally loved Perry in the first part. hehehe! Definitely not editor because he can yodel, huh? *giggles*

And I have to agree Valentine's Day is certainly a nice holiday. ...at least it is in nice waffy fics.

Nice ending, Coolgirl! And an nfic epilogue wouldn't hurt!

Ann

This was really sweet.
To me, the ending was just about perfect!

I love this.

I hope to see that eNpilogue.

Bob

Thanks for the loads of feedback.

Sara Thanks. Hope you didn't mind my little clarification up there.

Squirky
Ann
bobbart
That was probably a rash statement from me. But I will still try to post one.

Lara
Thanks, I loved writing him in this story.

And,
bellarata
It's probably easier writing a specific fic than a vague one, IMHO, because half the story is already given in the requirements.
Oh!
I've said this to many authors, but this is the first time someone has said this to me. Thanks a lot, bella. This one comment made my day.

That line’s so great

Great story. I absolutely loved this bit. You nailed it perfectly.

Thanks, Michael.

And Yay! New Reader. Thanks Female Hawk.

I loved this part. I particularly liked the beginning with Clark's thoughts about his feelings for Lois. It was beautifully written.

And the end where Lois asks him to hold her was just so sweet.

I know it's been a looong time... but I just wanted to tell any reader who remembers this fic that if they're interested they can find the eNpilogue in the NFanfic boards.

Thanks again for the FDKs. And thanks, anonpip