I hope I didn't start a new FDK thread if there already was one, but I couldn't find one.

This was great, Lara!

Ann

I had to look very hard to find this story since it was missing a blue arrow. If you hadn't had a fic-a-thon sequel I might have missed it entirely.


Elisabeth
who is off to read now and will be back later with legit feedback

One thing stayed in the back of my mind throughout the whole story. I just knew that by giving Lois so much detail about her future that she never would be allowed to keep her knowledge. I am happy that Herb took her back before Lois' harebrained scheme was launched. Perhaps there is such a thing as having too much knowledge about things to come.


Elisabeth

I just loved reading this next-gen story of yours!! And geez, all those kids made me cringe. EEK.