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Posted By: bobbart FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 - 12/18/08 07:24 PM
I had a feeling that Rachael might be tired for a reason. Too bad her career plans aren’t going where she wants them.

I loved the twist on the interview. smile1

This part got to me:
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Lois jerked away, almost as though freed from a spell by Clark’s voice. She hurried over to him, “Sorry... Lex... duty calls...”
.....Open rant.....
I really hate Lex. I mean, I REALLY hate Lex. I hate Lex so much that I’ve never even contemplated writing anything with Lex in it. I think I’ve changed my mind. I need to do something with Lex in a story so that his fate appropriately reflects my affection. devil
.....Close rant.....

Anyway, I love what you did with Lois's "interview" with Lex. Having Clark present as a chaperone provides for an interesting dynamic.

Bob
Posted By: Beth S. Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 - 12/18/08 10:03 PM
I really liked seeing CJ and Rachel together here without Clark. It was nice to see them interacting as husband and wife.

You've got me hooked with the future of this Lois and Clark. It's close to the original, yet there are some changes that make me so curious!
Posted By: Lieta Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 - 12/19/08 03:47 PM
Bob: Anything to inspire you! =P And originally I cut out Luthor's little speech.... but it has such creepy potential... I just had to work it back in.

Beth: I'm glad you liked that scene... originally I had Rachel describe it but didn't include it myself... I liked how it turned out =)
Wonderful part, Sara smile

Okay, I have to say, the possibility of Rachel being pregnant never crossed my mind when you mentioned her tiredness in the earlier parts. huh It's just so out there. A pregnancy without a dramatic impact in a LnC story huh

Michael
Posted By: Lieta Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 - 12/27/08 09:02 AM
I have to say... the imagery of Clark being there during that was amusing to me... but for Lex... RAFO =P

And for Rachel... yeah... pregnancy without any of the season 4 buildup, *shrug* but how do you like CJ's method of discovery and reaction? =P
Yeah, the hearing bit was so sweet blush

Michael
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