As I've already said, loved how you tied an element of the original show into the fic in this part. The link to Sgt Zymack was cleverly done.

I adored seeing Lois seriously contemplating the hunt of the investigative reporter within. I was surprised Clark was able to stop her coming.
I also loved Clark both missing, and re-learning his powers. As his trail gets stronger, so does his confidence, and he seems to find more of himself.

Keep it coming!

Wonderful part - exciting, interesting and it really got me involved. I could see Liz and Clark talking. I pictured everything. I love your writing

I, too, loved this part. A-plots so often bore me. But you have a wonderful ability to make your characters come alive, even when they are mostly vehicles for the A-plot.

I'm relieved that Liz made it, and that Clark knows about the connection between Thomas Timmons and Miss Bowen-Timmons!

Ann

Wonderful Jenni!

I saw this at like 3am [while up with a sick child and checking to see if we had school today - they do :p ].

Wonderful - wish Peterson would have listened to Clark. Glad he made the connection. Hopefully Zymack will - loved that connection.

More soon please .

Carol

Great part, Jenny. Nice secondaries I wonder if Sgt. Peterson meant Officer Zymak when he told Clark to tell someone else.

Michael

Love the touchback to Zymack since he was so involved in the episode when they worked together to free Jonathan and Martha.

This is a really interesting A plot and that is not something I that I am usually interested in.

Nice addition to the story.

Loved that Liz wasn't injured. Ane what is going on between Peterson and Zymack ?

James

Hi All,

Oh, I am slipping. I really thought I'd thanked you all for your fdk. I must be more stressed than I thought!

But not remembering doesn't mean I don't appreciate your comments, it just means I'm getting old.

I hope to post the next part tomorrow, and I think I'm on schedule to finish this monster by the end of the year.

Yours Jenni