Wow, really great, Max. I like the building dynamic between them and Clark being haunted by his past. Now in pt 10, Superman rescues Lois, right!

Artemis

Nice cliff hanger. Interesting change up on clark's history.

Looking forward I am hoping the rescuer will be Clark not Superman.

Oh, evil cliffy. How can you stop there? You're tantalizing us.

I like the way you're painting the slow growth of affection and respect between Lois and Clark - yes, a re-write of the pilot, but emphasizing different things. They are different people in your fic than they were in the pilot.

Excellent start, and please post more soon!

Clark! Turn those shapely little ears of yours to the plight of your maiden in distress! Or else she may end up like Lana did. Right?

Interesting chapter. Looking forward to more, and above all, looking forward to Superman - or Clark? - rescuing Lois!

Ann

"Comfortable Mach 35 in a wide ballistic trajectory..."love it when you talk tec. Makes our Clark very sexy.Love Lois' show of concern. No woman can resist a man with a past.
Good stuff.Now a rescue, I hope.

I agree with SJH. And you did a very nice job on a rocket motor.

Artemis

I read all nine parts. My favorite was the article that Clark wrote--very well done.


Elisabeth

Great stuff, Max. I so didn't see the attack coming. And Lois inhaling the Dim Sum was hilarious

Michael

great part. I am sure Clark or Superman will rescue her. Right? Hurry up and post the next part.