I am really enjoying following this familiar but different path that you are spinning.

In some ways Lois makes more sense this way. I have never been comfortable that she is so naturally distrusting in so many aspects of her life but she was so easily taken in by Lex. This Lois seems a bit more balanced.


This caught my eye:
I think a more balanced Lois may also prove more perceptive.

And this:
makes me think she's going to be less concerned about Cat and Clark.

I very much look forward to learning more about Lois.

Bob

Thanks Bob, =) And Lois' personal blindness always bugged me too... I didn't plan for her to be this smart originally and it changed how the fic progressed...

On another note... (and as I posted on another board) I would still like to see if I can't trade betaing or find someone else willing to beta Coin with Nancy and Rel.

I can't believe there's only one piece of FDK Wonderful, sweet part, Sara and looking forward to CJ and Clark trying out for the flying job.

I noted that Jimmy, Cat, and Perry weren't at the party?

Something else: I think it would be extremely funny if Lois is still oblivious to Clark=Superman, especially when he stands right next to her but whispers, 'Isn't that your brother flying there?'

Oh, and Rachel's detective got to be Henderson...

Michael

If I had the time, I would love to BR for you but as it stands

<3 Micheal, and Perry and Jimmy were there but since Clark was hanging with CJ they were in other parts of the room and not a focus... I don't think I mentioned Cat...

As for the rest.... =X