Feedback - Reflections, Part 7 - 12/04/08 08:02 PM
Would appreciate any comments posted here. I've written through part 18, and working out the reviewing them with my beta readers. Thanks for all the comments so far.
Max
Max
Re: Feedback - Reflections, Part 7 - 12/04/08 10:06 PM
Max:
Very good section. Shows the building attraction and the emotions of both parties.
Keep it coming.
Artemis
Very good section. Shows the building attraction and the emotions of both parties.
Keep it coming.
Artemis
Re: Feedback - Reflections, Part 7 - 12/05/08 04:24 AM
Mr. Kent in charge, like it. Liking this softer Lois.
Re: Feedback - Reflections, Part 7 - 12/06/08 07:54 AM
Okay, finally got caught up 
It's really interesting to see a more balanced relationship between LnC. And since Lois isn't as gun shy when it comes to men, Clark might just be in for a world of trouble
Michael
It's really interesting to see a more balanced relationship between LnC. And since Lois isn't as gun shy when it comes to men, Clark might just be in for a world of trouble
Michael