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by Toomi8
Toomi8
Chapter is here.

This chapter is quite a bit shorter so I'll post chapter 8 on Friday.
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by JadedEvie
JadedEvie
Loving the suspense of this unraveling!

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Sometimes they’re snippets of dreams, almost like a moment of deja vu. I have images of Superman standing in front of me, grinning at me in a way he’s never done before, or participating in investigations with Clark as my partner well beyond the time he worked at the Planet. In these moments, everything feels so right, and then I wake up, unsettled.
ooooo, I just love this little hint that something in the timeline is off but maybe in flux? SO interesting that she didn't have these dreams until after Wells moved her.

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...there are those that overwhelm me with contentment, and a joy I can’t explain. I’m holding onto these moments, allowing them to keep me going.
This i9s such a poignant punch to the gut.

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with every intention of being redirected to Jack.
This is just genius - using one Black brother against another this way.

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Checking no one is watching, I write the name a little bolder on the faded cardboard in the hope that someone else will be looking for John Black soon.
Oh my god! What a savage move! This is such an ingenious little detail - I just love it. Also stunning use of Lois Lane the reporter making an impact here with a writing tool.

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It’s all about respect and he’s not about to get that for possessing a fake ID and beating some guy up.
Oh, man, that's SO fun that Jack really knows!

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“I won’t see you again, will I?”
“Hopefully not. Take care, Jack.”
Little tugs at my heartstrings! This whole piece has had such a strand of melancholy woven through so well that even this makes makes me sad.

Looking forward to the rest!
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