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Comments: Persephone's Return #9928 01/20/04 09:09 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st... HatMan OP Pulitzer
OP HatMan Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st...	Thoughts? Comments? Suggestions? Constructive criticism? All are welcome. Projectiles, however, will be deflected back on the launcher. So there. :p Hey, Thursday isn't that far away. Paul When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9929 01/20/04 10:18 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	WHAT?! How? When? Who? With What? Add in a very long scream and that about sums up my thought process! I need more! More, I tell you! /me grumbles about Thursday "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9930 01/20/04 10:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Interesting! Quote Half an instant later, he was at her side. Carefully, he reached his hand out. Her flesh was cold. There was no pulse. He scanned her, desperately looking for some trick, but there was nothing. It was Lois, and she was dead. I'm going to have a heart attack. Don't do this to me. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9931 01/20/04 11:19 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	OH MY GOD!!! What happend? And how the heck are you going to fix that? You ARE going to fix it, aren't you? Thursday should better be here soon. Julia

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9932 01/20/04 11:55 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Paul!!!! Come back here and fix this!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9933 01/20/04 12:42 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Nicely evil. A good teaser, complete with a whammy cliffhanger. Well done. Waiting for more. Tank (who noticed that Paul didn't say which thursday he'd be posting this)

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9934 01/20/04 01:17 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Very sneaky Paul! I can't wait until Thursday! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9935 01/20/04 02:34 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada SuperRoo Merriwether
SuperRoo Merriwether Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada	Totally awesome! ARUGH! Can't wait for Thursday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sniffle Lois....dead???!!! I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9936 01/20/04 04:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA rivka Merriwether
rivka Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA	Ooh, preemptive strike! How Lois-like! Clever title. Is it Thursday yet? How about NOW? Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly. - Under the Tuscan Sun

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9937 01/20/04 05:51 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,168 Toronto, Ontario, Canada Julie S Top Banana
Julie S Top Banana Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,168 Toronto, Ontario, Canada	That was rather mean. And very . And certainly out of the blue. Fix it! Please...? Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be? Scully: I only get five? Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully? (The X-Files)

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9938 01/21/04 02:13 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Oh!!! Angst!!! More!!! "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9939 01/21/04 02:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana KathyB Merriwether
KathyB Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana	ARGH!!! Are you insane????? You can't kill Lois! Lois can't kill herself! I mean, it's just not done!!! Paul, how could you??? Get back here and fix this right now, young man!!!! Kathy (sorry, there was a sale on punctuation marks ...)

Re: Comments: Persephone's Return #9940 01/21/04 05:03 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st... HatMan OP Pulitzer
OP HatMan Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st...	Thank you for your comments, everyone. I appreciate them, especially given that this part was both unusually short and unusually evil. Rivka asked: Quote Is it Thursday yet? No. Jen, your questions will be answered shortly. Good luck with the time machine, though. Maria, I hope you're feeling better. We'll see how you are after part 2. Julia, your questions, too, will be answerd in part 2. Wendy, you mean I have to fix it? Are you sure? Tank, I'm glad you enjoyed. Liz, I'm not sure what you mean by sneaky, but I'll take it as a compliment. Roo, thanks for the rave review. Rivka, I'm glad you liked the title. Julie, I suppose it was rather mean, wasn't it? I couldn't resist that break, all the same. Just be glad that I was talked out of my earlier plan to post in more than 2 parts... Oh, and I will take your request under consideration. Jose, I guess this is angst. Not in the usual sense, but yeah... Huh. Well, at least you liked it. Thanks for letting me know. Kathy asked: Quote ARGH!!! Are you insane????? Yes (see Avatar image and text below, among other references), but that's another matter. Kathy also asked: Quote You can't kill Lois! Lois can't kill herself! I mean, it's just not done!!! It isn't? Hmm, that does seem to be the consensus. Darn. I guess that means I will have to fix it. Hmmm... <Edit, edit> No, can't use Hamilton's machine, that was broken... Er... Hmm... Nope. Sorry, it looks like part 2 will have to remain as written. Oh, and why didn't you tell me about the punctuation sale? I had to get mine at full retail! (Though luckily periods were available in bulk. Handy for all those ellipses...) Rivka also asked: Quote How about NOW? No, not quite... Of course, earlier today I got myself squeezed in for a repeat eye exam, since the new perscription has been giving me headaches and eye strain. It's before 3pm, which is pretty much first thing in my morning (thanks to my collection of sleeping disorders, I have my own personal time zone, which is currently roughly aligned with... let me check... New Zealand), and I'm not sure when I'll get back to the keys after that. It may not be until late, which wouldn't really be fair to you. One moment, let me check with my sources in Asgard... Quote "ARISE, COMRADES! FATHER'S DAY HAS PASSED, AND IT BE THOR'S DAY! SUMMON FORTH THE VALKYRIES! LET THE MEAD FLOW! LET..." "I can't believe we have to go through this every week..." "Well, at least tomorrow is Freya's day..." "Yeah, thank Woden for that..." "YOU'RE WELCOME." Yeah, I guess technically it is Thursday now. Okay, then... Thanks again to everyone who posted comments! I hope you enjoy part 2! Paul When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.

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