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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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First off, to start... Bill's reaction was hysterical! rotflol I can see his face deadpanning through the entire story, but on the inside thinking: I should have kept my trap shut!

Another thing: Bill's 'voice' is pitch perfect, he sounds like a concerned, experienced flatfoot who is working hard to help his friends. Although why he would consider using a pregnant Lois as bait is beyond me.

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In the underground office that was now their home, Smythe and Luckabee were both in the lounge area. As was his wont Luckabee was behind the bar. Now he wasn’t drinking out of boredom. Now there was purpose in it. He was making sure he had the poison antidote in his system in adequate quantities.
Doesn't Luckabee do anything besides drink? Even though I know why he's drinking so much, its going to get in the way of planning any exit moves.

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The best part is that the radioisotope she is using is that green rock. It could add an extra little punch.
This is not good for Lois, really bad for Clark!


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Hi Morgana,

Thanks for the FDK!

I'm glad that you liked my representation of Bill Henderson. I put a deal of time into getting his voice right.

Luckabee is drinking with a purpose. He has to make sure that he consumes the antidote in sufficient quantities.

Unfortunately, Smythe was able to get the sample of Kryptonite that Wayne had sent to Wichita. Could be a problem, as you pointed out.


Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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