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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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Clark flew Lois to the farm and put her on a lounge chair in the sun. He grabbed the phone and called Mr. Olsen at the Planet.
Thanks goodness Clark kept the house in Smallville. Its the perfect place for them to go for any type of recovery. Although if any enterprising person ever decided to look at the reverse billing they would see the call was coming from Kansas and not for around the block. Oh yeah, right .... Clark's secret is already blown in this universe. wink

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The relief in his voice was very apparent as he said, “That’s tremendous news!” Then like any true editor he asked, “How soon can I expect to see your copy?”
Some things never change! LOL!!!

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Just then a canoe rounded the point and approached their section of beach. Seeing this Lois stood up and started packing their things. Before they came close enough to get a good look Lois grabbed the bag, Clark spun into his Suit and picking up Lois they soared into the air.
Can't these two have a *little* privacy? mad Lois, Clark, might I suggest a private island one just for both of you to enjoy?

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Seeing and hearing this exchange spoke volumes to both Lois and Clark. Mayson had forgiven Clark and Lois for what had happened. The supposition was that the blossoming relationship with Scardino was the answer.
Hmmm Mayson and Daniel are *nicely* out of the way! Honestly though, I cannot hear their voices. It is hard for me to imagine elegant, well-dressed Mayson attracted to Hawaiian shirt wearing Scardino. Their personalities are so very different. Scardino is such a loose cannon! As the story progresses will we be seeing more of them?

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Jack sat, sullenly on the far side of the seat against the door. He considered opening the door and bolting when the cab came to a stop at a light. There were a couple of things that kept him from doing just that. He thought to himself, <How could I outrun Superman? If he came after me I don’t see how I could get away. This lady, I think he called her Lois, she’s sure pretty and she seems really nice, but what’s going to happen to Denny? He’s expecting me back before long. I hope he doesn’t start to worry and break cover. If he gets picked up they could separate us. I guess the best plan is to cooperate and get this over as quickly as possible so that I can get back to him. He’s just a kid and he might do something stupid.>

<I am going to need to shoplift some food or check some dumpsters on the way back. Wow, how far are we going? On foot it’s going to take me a long time to get back to Denny.>

<Why would Superman be offering a kid like me a job anyhow? What can he get out of it? What does he have up that blue sleeve of his? He doesn’t know me. How does he know he can trust me? If this is legit it could be okay. I have heard that he does a lot for kids. Maybe this could work out after all. I’ll have to wait and see what he says.”>
Jack was a very sullen young man when Clark originally found him. This version is also quiet and reserved but lacks - for lack of a better word - edge.

There are similarities between the two young men and it will be interesting to see just how you make Jack different, yet familiar.


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Hi Morgana,

Thanks for the FDK!

Yeah. In this universe everyone knows who Superman is. They kept the farm with the intention of living there. Things have gotten a little complicated with Lucy joining the family. As far as phone records are concerned, the only ones they call from the farm are those that they know and trust.

Yeah, it is somewhat inconvenient to have ‘their’ beach found. I guess other arrangements will need to be made, eventually.

Dan and Mayson: Keep in mind that this is an Alt universe. This is NOT the canon Dan Scardino. In this alternate universe he is an FBI Special Agent. He is NOT the Hawaiian shirt wearing DEA agent. He wears a suit and tie. He also has a somewhat different attitude. And, yes, we will be seeing more of Mayson and Dan.

RE Jack – I just couldn’t resist having Jack in this story. Just be patient.


Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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Jack is another character who mysteriously disappeared after season one. Who knows how his character might have grown if he had been allowed to stick around?

Scardino in a suit? This I gotta see more of!!!


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Hi Morgana,

All I can say is, 'Your wish is my command'. clap


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Why don't they just try to ignore the canoe and let it go by. The people might not recognize Clark Kent and some lady as the people on the beach. Sure, everyone knows what Clark Kent looks like, but they might not get close enough or pay enough attention to notice. Even if they do, so what. Superman was seen with a woman on a beach. That does not mean overly much. It is not like he is keeping his relationship with Lois secret. They draw more attention by running than staying.


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Hi John,

Thanks for the FDK!

Yeah, perhaps, but they wanted their private time. sloppy


Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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