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FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 #94174 03/31/13 11:15 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Ah, now here is the final installment of this little story. Hopefully everyone enjoyed the ending. Feedback is what the muse needs ...! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 #94175 03/31/13 04:54 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Awwww.... a happy ending! I love happy endings, especially when our heroes have earned them by going through travails first.

Re: FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 #94176 03/31/13 11:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Io: I thought a happy ending was best! Lois without Clark just doesn't seem right. Perhaps someday we will see how they handle the case of the cracked Mars Base Alpha dome. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 #94177 04/03/13 02:53 AM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk Kerth
Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia	Nice story, Morgana. I enjoyed your descriptions through the fic. Very vivid. At first, it seemed so sad that the anti-aging process had come too late to save Clark. Using it to give young Clark his young wife back worked great. Corrina.

Re: FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 #94178 04/03/13 03:43 AM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite Features Writer
AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	Yay! So glad he's alive and they're back together, as they should be! More great phrasing in this chapter, like the intuition leaping back to her mind like wildfire and the heartbreak striking them like a hail of bullets. It gives the story so much more impact. Had to laugh at Lois asking what she was supposed to do while his body was on vacation! Great story, Morgana! I'm all for happy endings!

Re: FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 #94179 04/10/13 11:26 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Corrina Quote At first, it seemed so sad that the anti-aging process had come too late to save Clark. Using it to give young Clark his young wife back worked great. Yes, it was a very happy ending! Oddly enough, no one wanted to know what was the first thing Lois was going to do when she became young again! AntiK Aren't happy endings the absolute best! Remember when we originally discussed this? I wanted to make it a deathfic. Sooo glad I changed my mind. This is a kinder, happier outcome. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 Morgana #283598 02/08/19 02:44 PM
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BlindPassenger Beat Reporter B Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 324 Likes: 3 Germany	This was a nice story to read. Glad that Old Lois has still her fire inside. One strange thing: So far i understand this right, this story is set in the Stranger universe, along with the visitor series. But in the latest chapter of that, Lois got superpowers herself and was Ultrawoman then. Why she's no longer "super"? Is there an explanation for that? Up, up and away - to the next fanfic.

Re: FDK: Garden of Memories Part 3 of 3 Morgana #283632 02/11/19 04:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	WOW! So cool to have someone write a comment on a story that was posted nearly six years ago. Quote This was a nice story to read. Glad that Old Lois has still her fire inside. One strange thing: So far i understand this right, this story is set in the Stranger universe, along with the visitor series. But in the latest chapter of that, Lois got superpowers herself and was Ultrawoman then. Why she's no longer "super"? Is there an explanation for that? Yes, Lois at any age is a forced to be reckoned with! As was mentioned above this fic was written a long time ago. At some point in time, Lois will loss her superpowers and become an ordinary woman once more. But that will not occur until after all of their children are conceived. That's my best explanation. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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