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Michael: Oh, dear. Did I cross that line again? I have so much trouble with that darn line.

CLARK: Of course, I approve. But he has to do the touching on Wally. And Wally is more than welcome to punch his lights out if Ralph touches him somewhere he doesn't want to be touched.

WALLY: Works for me.

RALPH: I don't want to touch him.

CLARK: What's the difference between him and Cat?

CAT: Honey, if you don't know that answer, you have more serious problems than we thought. It will take long intensive therapy to cure. Fortunately, I know a good sex therapist.

RALPH: I'll take sex therapy with Cat.

CAT: Honey, I wasn't offering it to you.

WALLY: <starts to raise hand>

CAT: Or you.

CLARK: I know the difference. I was asking them.

LOIS: Can I punch Ralph's lights out? But without him touching me?

CLARK: Lois, Perry asked that you sit this seminar out because we need at least one reporter in the newsroom in case of breaking story.

LOIS: <slight pout> Fine. But call me, I'll be right outside the conference room door if you need me to punch his lights out.

EW: I've gone on too long, so I'll end this little vignette right here. Thank you.

EW: See above.

X Phile: Welcome back! Sporatic FDK is always welcome. Hope your classes are going well.

Always good to hear.

Okay, you win. (My daughter's 2nd grade homework took forever, but not that long.) Let's hope that it isn't a daily class.

Michael

Do you mean Lois "HITS" harder? How is this a difference between Wally and Cat? I bet Cat hits harder too.

WALLY: Hey!

CAT:

WALLY: <<groan>> I lie down corrected.

LOIS: Care to repeat that?

Thank you.

but but but Wally’s 300 pounds of wobbling, sweating fat. Of course, he’s got bigger ones. They also have a lot of drag.

Oops. /nods/

Michael

Oh, you mean he needs a "bro". (aka a man-bra, or is it called a 'man-ssiere'?)

WALLY: What? I don't weigh 300 pounds. 240 at most. And it's all muscle.

CAT: <looks him up and down> 340, and he definately has more wobble than me, but it's mostly around the gut area.

LOIS: <<innocently>> Well, if they read the Met Star, they really should be expecting it, shouldn't they? BTW, see Female Hawk's "The Accused" on the accuracy of Met Star's inaccurate reporting of those type of events.

Michael

I think it should just be "picked up that", I do not think you need the on.

I think that should just be "Menken started". Either that or you could maybe go with "Menken's office started".

I think that should be "knew as many".

I think there should be an "and between down and saw and a "the" in front of courtyeard.

I think that should be "it to him" at the end of the first sentance.

I think it should be "back to the elevators" at the end there.

Freudian slip? Thanks.

Right. Have no idea what I was thinking here. Fixed.

Nope, it isn't a comparison statement. He's Superman; he's actually "knew many" victims.

Wow, this was really rough. about the stuff that slipped through the cracks. Thanks.

Yes, that does make more sense. <<hits self with 2x4>> I do read these parts before posting, you know. Not that it's obvious. You're a treasure, John. Thanks.

When I type fast often articles get dropped. I often write in notebooks and transcribe onto the computer. I'm trying to read aloud my parts before posting now, but as I do it before bedtime, my brain function isn't always there. Thanks. You'd be amazed at how many errors I actually FIXED before posting.

This sentance is really bugging me. It makes sense through debris as is. However "as from the winds themselves" does not seem to be a whole phrase. The idea that "as many people" sets up the comparison. Or you could say "many more people were hurt from falling debris as from the winds themselves", or "many fewer ..." although I don't think that is what you meant. Maybe I am off base but the "as from the winds themselves" part seems to be setting up a comparison, but that is not how the first part is worded. The issue is not how many people Clark can know, but that the "as" compares the first part and the later part.

It would also work with "not just" instead of "as" before "the winds themselves".