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#89123 08/21/12 08:22 AM
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#89124 08/21/12 11:04 AM
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Hi LLF,

I can't wait for WW to use her lasso on Luthor to make him forget everything, including his name. clap rotflol


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Sigh....

Working is calling, but I *will* tackle this fic soon. Sorry!

Love the potential. Ms. Vale is the best! thumbsup


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#89126 08/27/12 10:18 AM
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Lex used WW lasso against her to find out Superman's secret identity and then erased her mind, so she doesn't remember telling him or that he's the one behind all the thefts? clap

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Clark stood there trying to take in everything Lois had just told him for a moment, debating whether or not he should follow her. In the end, he decided not to.
Always go with your gut instinct there, Clark.

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Lois arrived at the Out of This World cookie shop to find Vicki sitting in the back of a limousine parked behind some bushes. She walked over to it, opened the door, and got inside.

“Not the best vehicle for a stakeout, Vicki. This won’t look suspicious at all,” Lois said sarcastically.
You've got to be kidding me.

So, who is this Michael Horn fellow? I'm betting he's not going to be happy about the two nosey reporters following him around.

You're keeping the tension tight, aren't you?!


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#89127 11/07/12 07:42 PM
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Are you ever going to post the last three parts of this story? I'm dying to know how Lois and Vicki turn out (and turn up) and how it's going to intermingle with the JL storyline. Don't leave us hanging!


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#89128 11/08/12 07:45 AM
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This is a second vote from a reader who has not given up hope. There are a lot of different threads here that all need to be drawn together.


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#89129 11/10/12 12:23 PM
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Thanks for the feedback. smile

I'm about to post a new chapter now.


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