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FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88294 07/25/12 02:59 PM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Comments go here. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88295 07/25/12 07:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Did you go see "Brave" this past weekend, Ken? That's who your heroine reminded me of. Sean and Heather were adorable. So sad about Mr. Halverson. When I heard that his Doctor's name was Ferguston, I thought he might be related to Sean's first love... but it was another one of your sneaky red herrings! This opening reminded me of the opening of your romance between Jon and his first love that for a moment I thought it might be the same gathering, but I think the characters are a bit old to be teenage girls (although maybe not Lucy) on the beach. Thank you for satisfying my daily dose of romance. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88296 07/25/12 11:09 PM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Hi Virginia, Thanks for the FDK! The names have been changed because I couldn't remember the real ones. The first ER scene was one I lived through as one of the staff. The brother/sister dialogue was fun to write. 5 more to go. I don't know if I can get them all done by the deadline of the ficathon challengez, nut I'll try. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88297 07/26/12 01:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Will read tonight. This is going to be interesting for sure!!!! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88298 07/27/12 01:44 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Sean and Heather are cool! Loove the Scottish accent. That Doctor does not have the right to decide how long a person can live or die. ESPECIALLY if their spouse is there. Just my rant. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88299 07/27/12 02:02 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Hi Morgana, Unfortunately that was exactly the way it played out. He tied our hands and kept us from doing any of the numerous things we could have done to save his life. His wife was too grief stricken to the point of being shockey to say anything let along try to contradict the doctor's order. All she could do was sit there hold his hand and weep for her partner of so many years. It was heart rending and totally frustrating. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88300 07/28/12 12:29 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Quote The grandchildren all mobbed Grandpa Clark and Grandma Lois as soon as they arrived to say hi, before going over to the play area. This does give on a slight Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: First Love part 2 - Summer Ficathon Challenge #88301 07/28/12 02:08 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Hi Michael, Thanks for the FDK. I'm glad you liked my little story. Heather is a combination of a Scottish woman I know and my niece who happens to ne named, oddly enough, Heather. BTW: her brother's name is Sean. I've mixed up the family relationships somewhat. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

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