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Hi, Michael! :wave


Well, a bikini does *bother* him.

Only he's allowed to see Lois like that?

I *love* throwing people off.



And just think, by that time, Ultra Woman stuff would be considered "retro."

Well, Marla-El, but thanks!

Or does he? With her powers and all, mischief made could be 1,000 times worse!

Huh, look at that. Nope, I can honestly say that didn't cross my mind when I was writing this.

Stalk...er...spy...er...watch...er...guard...from a distance?

<is pretty sure the boys are noticing her ah, *physical* condition too>



It's good that she's not flying yet, so she can't sneak out.

Thank you, Michael!

Thanks, Mouse! Glad you enjoyed it! I had fun writing it.

Thanks, Morgana. I have to say that I side with both Lois and Clark on this. It's good to slow down the ride, but they should trust her (so long as she's given them a *reason* to trust her). Clark's just bing a *tad* overprotective.

Next one should be coming sometime next month, I hope. I'm polishing and getting it beta'd as we speak!

Thanks, Ken. Funny thing is, I don't remember having fights/arguments like this with my folks at that age. I'm just young enough to still remember what my peers were like!

Thanks so much, Artemis! Glad to give you a little throw back to those days!

If you ask Clark, I'm sure he'll say yes. If you ask Lois, she'll likely pull out the green crystals.

Umm...I'm sure Clark would start dismembering boys if they were already noticing this particular condition. ML put it into A Matter of Destiny. You see, she's invulnerable. And thus, boys might not be physically able to achieve a home-run with her.

National Whisper: Superman seen at spring break wet T-shirt contest.

That's what steel bars on the windows are for?

Michael

Half the 16 year olds I see act/dress/are developed enough to look like they are 20. But watching Clark dismember the boys could be fun. Also, at home-runness.

<spews oolong tea over monitor>

So, that buys Clark 2.5 seconds of keeping her in?

Hmmm typo. I meant to say, Clark should not hold her back from growing up, just slowing it down a little.

There are plenty of cute one piece bathing suits to wear.

Anyhow, like I wrote before...great job!!!

If she's willing to do property damage.

Michael

Thanks again, Morgana!

Although, I side with Rebecca in this case. I've always despised one piece suits. I feel like I'm wearing wet saran wrap in them. :p

Angsty teen = yes?

Cute little Gen X story. Yes, I see Clark being the overprotective dad. Hello? He's the overprotective sort, isn't he? I'm guessing, if she wanted to she could speed off in the suit, but Clark would probably notice her going by. You mentioned that she was the youngest daughter, is she the only daughter? Or did he not have this problem with her older sister(s)?

I love that Lois is defending her daughter's choice in clothing (or lack thereof). Nice to see she didn't turn into an Ellen. (Not that any of us thought she would).

Fun story.

</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by VirginiaR:
<strong> Cute little Gen X story. Yes, I see Clark being the overprotective dad. Hello? He's the overprotective sort, isn't he? I'm guessing, if she wanted to she could speed off in the suit, but Clark would probably notice her going by. You mentioned that she was the youngest daughter, is she the only daughter? Or did he not have this problem with her older sister(s)?

I love that Lois is defending her daughter's choice in clothing (or lack thereof). Nice to see she didn't turn into an Ellen. Hi, Virginia!

Thanks! Yes, Clark is very overprotective, isn't he? But if Rebecca had sped off, not only would he have seen it, but he probably could have beaten her to her ultimate destination.

In this one, she's the only daughter. I've been sticking with a formula of two boys and a girl for Lois and Clark. I dunno, it just works for me.

No, Lois is definitely *not* another Ellen Lane! Yikes!

Actually, I think Rebecca realizes the last thing she wants to do is rush out. If she does her father has every reason to bring her back. She may be an angsty teen, but she knows that it is more embarrasing having your father show up and tell you to come home than to miss the party entirely.

Yeah, that's always possible too. Being a teen is rough. It's got to be even worse when your dad has super powers. And pretty much every teen is embarrassed by their parents even when said parent is NOT hauling them home in front of their friends.