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Does Tempus ever think that one is enough? Well, it was his fault for going to the other dimension in the first place. But she *is* more concerned about what torn flesh would look like when it sticks to her nails or how a blood-smeared mouth might not be considered proper. That would only work when she uses her green glowing homemade nail poilish. Hey! I *did* finish Dare. I just never got to the intended squeeels. Hmmmm. It must have been that PML adaption, I was thinking of.
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I just noticed that the lead-in quote from Part 9 in this section does not contain the re-write that was done at the end of Part 9. I am not sure if it matters, but we get lead in with Clark being willing to believe Lois' point about copy just rewriting your story.
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I just realized something: This story has now been going on for over a year. And there is no sign of stopping. And has it really been a year already?  Michael
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Originally posted by John Lambert:
I just noticed that the lead-in quote from Part 9 in this section does not contain the re-write that was done at the end of Part 9. I am not sure if it matters, but we get lead in with Clark being willing to believe Lois' point about copy just rewriting your story. My apologies. It's been fixed.
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Originally posted by Darth Michael: I just realized something: This story has now been going on for over a year. And there is no sign of stopping. And has it really been a year already? Michael  Thanks, Michael, for that laugh. I'm still here. I'm still posting. Actually, according to my TOC, I started posting this story at the end of May 2012, so we're into our 13th month and I'm still posting. Have I mentioned my lack of a RL? 
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I had forgotten how close Clark came to kissing Lois as SM in this part. I do not think his feeling her hair really counts as keeping proper distance as SM. I think  , of I guess I can't say that because it relates to a later episode. No wonder Superman had almost kissed her. It had almost impossible to resist a come-on line like that. It took all of his willpower, and one call for help, to distract him from pressing his lips to hers. I think either you want to change "had" to "was", which is the simplest way, or say "Had been almost". I am pretty sure the way it is right now just does not work.
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Originally posted by John Lambert: I had forgotten how close Clark came to kissing Lois as SM in this part. I do not think his feeling her hair really counts as keeping proper distance as SM. I think , of I guess I can't say that because it relates to a later episode. I think either you want to change "had" to "was", which is the simplest way, or say "Had been almost". I am pretty sure the way it is right now just does not work. Thanks. Fixed.
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